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There is no need to maintain a close relationship with distant relatives

There is no need to maintain a close relationship with distant relatives 2x33j
Relationships are very important even necessary in every person's life especially with family and relatives. That dos not mean the wole family tree. Cause some people just do not get along. As far as I am cosurned, maintaining a relationship with far relatives is all good if it is not forced. In the first place, people are stressed out with their busy and pressure life so it is difficult for them to maintain unnecessary conections, especially with distant family members. Usually, that tipe of connection do not provide them comfort. When communicating as a result it could lead them to the feeling of unwanted even tired. Therefor, you won’t feel satisfied when meeting them anymore. For instance, probably they never want to be a good friend with wacky and unusual cousin, who is much different from them. trying to maintain good and close relationship with that tipe of persone may cause them to be unbearably emotional and at the end change thier personality to fit the cousins. However, it is disrespectful if they behave inapropriet with their relative just becouse poor communication. In many familys, it seems to be that children should be empathic with everyone in their family, never mind if they have a close relationshipaffair with them or not. Being generous with everyone is not just showes that you are educated, but also your family. It shows how good of a pernents they were and how they thought them from a young age. This opinion makes children, in particular teenagers feel unsatisfied in family meetings. They feel like it is a big role for them to play to be a perfect person with your distante family members. In conclusion, nobody should maintain an uncomfortable connection with thier distance family members. Otherwise, they will change just to behave rightly with them and that could cause a lot of problems.
Relationships are
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important
even necessary in every person's life
especially
with
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family
and relatives. That dos not mean the
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wole
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family
tree. Cause
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some
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people
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just
do not
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get
along. As far as I am
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cosurned
, maintaining a relationship with far relatives is all
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good
if it is not forced.

In the
first
place,
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people
are
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stressed
out with their busy and pressure life
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so
it is difficult for them to maintain unnecessary
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conections
,
especially
with distant
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family
members.
Usually
, that
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tipe
of connection do not provide them comfort. When communicating
as a result
it could lead them to the feeling of unwanted even tired. Therefor, you won’t feel satisfied when meeting them anymore.
For instance
,
probably
they never want to be a
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good
friend with wacky and unusual cousin, who is much
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different
from them.
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trying
to maintain
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good
and close relationship with that
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tipe
of
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persone
may cause them to be
unbearably
emotional and at the
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end
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change
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thier
personality to fit the cousins.

However
, it is disrespectful if they behave
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inapropriet
with their relative
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just
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becouse
poor communication. In
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many
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familys
, it seems to be that children should be empathic with everyone in their
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family
, never mind if they have a close
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relationshipaffair
with them or not. Being generous with everyone is not
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just
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showes
that you
are educated
,
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also
your
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family
. It
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how
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good
of a
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pernents
they were and how they
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thought
them from a young age. This opinion
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makes
children,
in particular
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teenagers
feel unsatisfied in
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family
meetings. They feel like it is a
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big
role for them to play to be a perfect person with your
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distante
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family
members.

In conclusion
, nobody should maintain an uncomfortable connection with
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thier
distance
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family
members.
Otherwise
, they will
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change
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just
to behave
rightly
with them and that could cause
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a lot of
problems.
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IELTS essay There is no need to maintain a close relationship with distant relatives

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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