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Benefits of Reality TV Programs

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A reality TV programs is about features the ordinary lives of different people, their behaviors, interactions, relationships, and so on. It also involves the filming of real-life situations where individuals undertake specific tasks. And some people think that it's not nesscessary. i don't think so. Here are several reasons. Firstly, reality shows don’t require huge budgets to produce as compared to prime time drama shows. They only need a plot, interesting characters and they’re off to make a commercial success. Secondly, as there is no gender differentiation, everyone will get equal opportunity to showcase their talents. Everything is fair because the final winner is chosen meticulously without being tolerant and with so many rounds that even an amateur player becomes a professional by the time he leaves the show winner or not. And finally, it's real because there are no makeovers, no silly settings, no elaborate script, … everything real almost and you can relate your own styles. In conclusion, reality television is benefiting real life relationships of stars and those who tune in to watch t every evening by providing with great experiences
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, their behaviors, interactions, relationships, and
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. Here are several reasons.
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don’t require huge budgets to produce as compared to prime time drama
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characters and
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equal opportunity to showcase their talents. Everything is
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rounds that even an amateur player becomes a professional by the time he
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winner or not. And
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, it's real
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own
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, reality television is benefiting real life relationships of stars and those who tune in to
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watch
t every evening by providing with great
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experiences
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IELTS essay Benefits of Reality TV Programs

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