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there is no doubt that these days lots of companies which is in competition do much effort to grab attention of thier followers .Althought the consumers maybe they didn't

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there is no doubt that these days lots of companies which is in competition do much effort to grab attention of thier followers. Althought the consumers maybe they didn't need this advertisements'product include. The only suggest to protect them is the chance to let them try and touch the product, with replace or return option and this essay will discuss how the bouiers grasp to advertisement and the most useful way to protect them from bad and fake one. First of all, lots of public are buying 80% of their thing and stuff wich they didn't need it at all but because of this creative advertisements with magic affect by acting or talking during the video or even a picture. To illustrate, while you are watching you're favorite movie or drive your car you faced more than five advertisement just an hour, so the makers try to make their videos touch the need of wachers by make the life easier while using simple and cheep products. For example, to those who has a problem with their skin even if it's unseen, the advertisement will show a face with lots of the scars and using cream during ten days with professional editing, then all the scars disappeared completely this how the people affected by watch it in coincidence. Furtheremore, protect the client from addiction of buying by advertisements affect, even thought via online or real shops. Step like this is very necessary because not all what we see is real so make the client try the product for days and finally decide if it's good or not. ‏ Also if all of rhese thing where bought via online website they replace option must be available. For example before four years I bought hair strighter which is making her very soft. After just one week the device just blow up while using. shortly, checking the products games, skincare, machine, or anything is basic thing that companies could do for the consumer. In conclusion, companies may grasp the claimants attention in a bad way to competition with others. Furing watching advertisement made a lot buy something they didn't very important for them and get tricked, so we could do some point to protect clients. In my opinion consumers should think carefully before buying anything, even if it's cheepy. In addition if you already bought it and you didn't like it at all return or replace can assist you.
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is no doubt that these days
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of
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which is in competition do much effort to grab attention of
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thier
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Althought
the consumers maybe they didn't need
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advertisements'product include. The
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suggest to
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protect
them is the chance to
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let
them
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touch the
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product
, with replace or return option and this essay will discuss how the
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bouiers
grasp to
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advertisement
and the most useful way to
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protect
them from
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bad
and fake one.

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,
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lots
of public are buying 80% of their thing and stuff
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wich
they didn't need it at all
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but
because of this
creative
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advertisements
with magic
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affect
by acting or talking during the video or even a picture. To illustrate, while you are
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watching you're
favorite movie or drive your car you faced more than five
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advertisement
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just
an hour,
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so
the makers try to
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make
their videos touch the need of
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wachers
by
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make
the life easier while using simple and cheep
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products
.
For example
, to those who has a problem with their skin even if it's unseen, the
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advertisement
will
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show
a face with
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lots
of the scars and using cream during ten days with professional editing, then all the scars disappeared completely this how the
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people
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affected
by
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watch
it in coincidence.

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Furtheremore
,
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protect
the client from addiction of buying by
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advertisements
affect, even
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thought
via online or real shops. Step like this is
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very
necessary
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because
not all what we
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see
is real
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so
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make
the client try the
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product
for days and
finally
decide if it's
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good
or not. ‏
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if all of
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thing where
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bought
via online website they replace option
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be available.
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four years I
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bought
hair
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strighter
which is making her
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very
soft.
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one week the device
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blow up while using.
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, checking the
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products
games, skincare, machine, or anything is basic thing that
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companies
could do for the consumer.

In conclusion
,
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companies
may grasp the
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attention in a
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bad
way to competition with others.
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watching
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made a
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buy
something they didn't
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very
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for them and
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get
tricked,
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so
we could do
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some
point to
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protect
clients. In my opinion consumers should
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think
carefully
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before
buying anything, even if it's
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cheepy
. In
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addition
if you already
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bought
it and you didn't like it at all return or replace can assist you.
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IELTS essay there is no doubt that these days lots of companies which is in competition do much effort to grab attention of thier followers. Althought the consumers maybe they didn't

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
405 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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