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There is immediate and free availability of knowledge on the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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Internet has revolutionised how one can learn and educates with the help of it acquiring new knowledge has become free of cost an a click away. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of the phenomenon. There are several advantages of the same. To begin with scientific research has become faster than ever. All it takes is a click on Google to search to find an answer to even most complicated quary. For an instance transcripts of all the research papers are available online through it become easy to extract as many information possible with a few clicks. Further more, since it is free to access data on the web, the underprivilege have to access education as well. As compared to paying lakhs of rupees as tution fees all they need Is an affordable smartphone to access as many lessons as they want. For an instance, there are dedicated platforms like Khan academy and youtube channels where free education is available. However, there are many disadvantages of this Trend as well Firstly the future generations is going to vitness lack of brainstorming and creativity. They tend to find every answer on the without putting their own efforts. It is essential for are brain to learn problem solving skills and the quick access of unlimited data on web is acting as hindrance the same. Secondly, because one does not have to pay for the knowledge a lot of unrealistic contact gets circulated. As human's we share whatever we learn with are kith and kins and due to which they do not have to pay for it. They obsorb it and belive it. For example a lot of propoganda and fake news is shared in whatsapp groups. To conclude, this essay has describe the positives and negatives of internet base knowledge wich can be access freely and quickly.
Internet has
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revolutionised
how one can learn and educates with the
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help
of it acquiring new knowledge has become free of cost
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an a
click away. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of the phenomenon.

There are several advantages of the same. To
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begin
with scientific research has become faster than ever. All it takes is a click on Google to search to find an answer to even most complicated
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quary
. For an instance transcripts of all the research papers are available online through it become easy to extract as
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many information
possible with a few clicks.
Further
more, since it is free to
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access
data on the web, the
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underprivilege
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have to
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access
education
as well
. As compared to paying lakhs of rupees as
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tution
fees all they need Is an affordable smartphone to
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access
as
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many
lessons as they want. For an instance, there
are dedicated
platforms like Khan academy and
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youtube
channels where free education is available.

However
, there are
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many
disadvantages of this Trend
as well
Firstly
the future generations is going to
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vitness
lack of brainstorming and creativity. They tend to find every answer on the without putting their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
efforts. It is essential for are brain to learn problem solving
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skills
and the quick
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access
of unlimited data on web is acting as hindrance the same.
Secondly
,
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because
one does not
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have to
pay for the knowledge
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a lot of
unrealistic contact
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gets
circulated. As human's we share whatever we learn with are kith and
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kins
and due to which they do not
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have to
pay for it. They
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obsorb
it and
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belive
it.
For example
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a lot of
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propoganda
and fake news
is shared
in
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whatsapp
groups.

To conclude
, this essay has
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describe
the positives and negatives of internet base knowledge
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wich
can be
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access
freely
and
quickly
.
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IELTS essay There is immediate and free availability of knowledge on the internet. with the statement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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