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how can we protect endangered animals?

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Human beings seem to have a fascination with endangered species. Perhaps it has something to do with collective guilt or the realization that if something is not done, these unique plants and creatures will be gone forever. Reducing your own environmental impact will affect so many of the problems that endangered species face. Driving less, buying local, or switching to renewable power will reduce your impact on climate change by lowering your own personal emission levels. You can also avoid buying or using single-use plastic products whenever possible.
Human beings seem to have a fascination with endangered species. Perhaps it has something to do with collective guilt or the realization that if something is not done, these unique plants and creatures will
be gone
forever.

Reducing your
own
environmental impact will affect
so
many
of the problems that endangered species face. Driving less, buying local, or switching to renewable power will
reduce
your impact on climate
change
by lowering your
own
personal emission levels. You can
also
avoid buying or using single-
use
plastic products whenever possible.
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IELTS essay how can we protect endangered animals?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
88 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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