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There is five category product of export earnings in 2015 an 2016

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There is five category product of export earnings in 2015 an 2016, start from petroleum products which has three percent increase from a year before and it holds the highest earning in export, and the second there are engineered goods has 8, 5% increase in 2016, and in the third there is gems and jewellery product that decrease 5. 18%, sadly this is the inly decrease in export earnings in 2015-2016. The highest increase held by textiles product which the increase is 15. 24%. And the smallest increase held by agricultural products which has 0. 81% increase.
There is five category
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product
of export earnings in 2015 an 2016,
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from petroleum
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which has three percent
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from a year
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and it holds the highest earning in export, and the second there
are engineered
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goods
has 8, 5%
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increase
in 2016, and in the third
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there is gems
and
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jewellery
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product
that decrease 5. 18%,
sadly
this is the
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inly
decrease in export earnings in 2015-2016. The highest
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held by
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textiles
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product
which the
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is 15. 24%. And the smallest
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held by agricultural
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products
which has 0. 81%
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IELTS essay There is five category product of export earnings in 2015 an 2016

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