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why I should choose study abroad at uk?

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Sami Mufreh Al-Anzi 15/9/2021 This essay will describe, why I should choose to study at Uk except other countries? AS far as I know, many people dream to study abroad to improve their skills like me, because I want to be a successful chemical engineering. Moreover it's a great chance to explore my major at the universities there. There're many benefits of studying at UK. First of all, the most vital thing to consider is that you can evolve yourself from other students and the great courses in your major in order to devolpe my country more and more. Furthermore you can evolve your English language easily. I also can understand my major more, because I can study math, physics and chemistry etc…. by wonderful teachers there. There're additional reasons for studying abroad like Uk. One of them is that you can depend on yourself, no one won't say to you how to study or how to deal with the problems related to your studying and your exams. You must mange your time and arrange your initials. In sum up to, UK is the best country for studying my major in it, due the fact that the universities there have great experience at chemical engineering. Moreover they have good teachers who teaches the students to evolve their skills.
Sami
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Al-Anzi


15/9/2021

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IELTS essay why I should choose study abroad at uk?

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