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There is far greater access to satellite and internet television which improves international understanding and is an educational tool. To what extend do you agree or disagree

There is far greater access to satellite and internet television which improves international understanding and is an educational tool. YR77Q
The world has achieved greater heights with the usage of satellite and internet media. Wireless connectivity is the new trendsetter. Also, it is an important tool, in case of education and to global understanding. I agree with the above said view and shall elaborate it in the following essay. Satellite has provided everyone with the access to Internet television. To begin with, with the help of online media, an individual has the freedom to explore whatever he wants. It not only gives knowledge but also increases the understanding of universal platform. It is also a preferred source and a tool for educational purpose. It is available for seeking any kind of information we need through various platforms like google, youtube, wikipedia and so on. The wireless media has proved to be a everyday need for everyone. For instant, during the global pandemic, every office, study centers were closed down. Educational institutes were unable to conduct classes and employees were not able to go to work physically. With the help of internet everyone was able to do their work online without any casualties as classes were held online and work was done by sitting at home. It did not cause any damage to the professional life of any one even after this deadly virus outbreak. But, overconsumption of any thing has its side effects, as using too much of online media can cause various unneeded addiction and can affect someone's mind, also the digital platform can cause eyes irritation and a kind of laziness in doing our work physically. However, to conclude, internet is the modern day sensation in every aspect of life. And will be more and more advanced in the futurrme to come
The world has achieved greater heights with the usage of satellite and internet
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media
. Wireless connectivity is the new trendsetter.
Also
, it is an
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important
tool, in case of education and to global understanding. I
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agree
with the above said view and shall elaborate it in the following essay.

Satellite has provided everyone with the access to Internet television. To
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begin
with, with the
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help
of
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online
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media
, an individual has the freedom to explore whatever he wants. It not
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only
gives knowledge
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but
also
increases the understanding of universal platform. It is
also
a preferred source and a tool for educational purpose.
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It
is available for seeking any kind of information we need through various platforms like google,
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youtube
,
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wikipedia
and
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on.

The wireless
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media
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has
proved to be
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a
everyday need for everyone. For instant, during the global pandemic, every office, study centers
were closed
down. Educational institutes were unable to conduct classes and employees were not able to go to
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work
physically
. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of internet everyone was able to do their
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work
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online
without any casualties as classes
were held
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
and
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work
was done
by sitting at home. It did not cause any damage to the professional life of any one even after this deadly virus outbreak.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, overconsumption of
Did you mean "anything"?
any thing
has its side effects, as using too much of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
can cause various unneeded addiction and can affect someone's mind,
also
the digital platform can cause eyes irritation and a kind of laziness in doing our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
physically
.

However
,
to conclude
, internet is the modern day sensation in every aspect of life. And will be more and more advanced in the
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futurrme
to
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come
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IELTS essay There is far greater access to satellite and internet television which improves international understanding and is an educational tool.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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