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In modern life, every large cities come across to the issue named traffic congestion. In this essay, I will discuss the root of problem and give solutions to tackle it.

In modern life, every large cities come across to the issue named traffic congestion. In this essay, I will discuss the root of problem and give solutions to tackle it. obyPD
In modern life, every large cities come across to the issue named traffic congestion. In this essay, I will discuss the root of problem and give solutions to tackle it. Two main reasons of this problem are the size of traffic highways and the increasing number of vehicles. It is clear that, narrow roads bring about the congestion of cars and damage them. There is no limit in car production in fabrics and this allow them to bring out cheap and comfort cars. As a result every type of people have affords to purchase this means of inexpensive vehicles. After a while, it causes traffic jam and leads to the long waiting in one place. When it comes to solutions, the first thing that helps to eradicate the issue is expanding the size of roads. The next is separating roads into sections which I mean is that there should be the path for special service machines such as ambulance, police and firefighters. The last solutions is related to the limitations of car usage between individuals. What I mean is that people should be forced to go somewhere by public transports instead of using their own ones. All in all, there are many problems of traffic jams but the main solutions are the limitations of transport usage and enlarge the traffic paths, which bears on the declining of vehicle numbers and makes up empty and quite places.
In modern life, every large cities
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come
across to the issue named
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traffic
congestion. In this essay, I will discuss the root of problem and give
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solutions
to tackle it.

Two main reasons of this problem are the size of
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traffic
highways and the increasing number of vehicles. It is
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clear
that, narrow roads bring about the congestion of
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cars
and damage them. There is no limit in
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car
production in fabrics and this
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allow
them to bring out
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cheap
and comfort
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cars
.
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a result every type of
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people
have affords to
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purchase
this means of inexpensive vehicles. After a while, it causes
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traffic
jam and leads to the long waiting in one place.

When it
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comes
to
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solutions
, the
first
thing that
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helps
to eradicate the issue is expanding the size of roads. The
next
is separating roads into sections which I mean is that there should be the path for special service machines such as ambulance, police and firefighters. The last
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solutions
is related
to the limitations of
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car
usage between individuals. What I mean is that
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people
should
be forced
to go somewhere by public transports
instead
of using their
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own
ones.

All in all, there are
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many
problems of
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traffic
jams
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but
the main
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solutions
are the limitations of transport usage and enlarge the
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traffic
paths, which bears on the declining of vehicle numbers and
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makes
up empty and quite places.
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IELTS essay In modern life, every large cities come across to the issue named traffic congestion. In this essay, I will discuss the root of problem and give solutions to tackle it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
236 words
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