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There is an ongoing debate over the role of education.

There is an ongoing debate over the role of education. E3A2M

There is an ongoing debate over the role of education. Some hold the view that the main reason for educating individual ought to be preparing a beneficial person for society, whilst others consider that education is the key factor for people to reach their goals. In my opinion, education is necessary to find a decent job, however, I agree with the idea that it helps people to become better citizens. Those who support the former view claims that with the help of schooling plenty of people can increase their living standards. To put it in another way

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