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There is an irrefutable fact that young generation prefers dining out to eating at home compared to the past. It is also believed that going to the restaurant has its own benefits and drawbacks On the one hand, there are several advantages when you have your main meal outside. If you have occupied with your job, getting a meal at the restaurant will be a superb idea. Since the food will be cooked by the chef, who has the capability to make your sustenance tastier. On top of that, you do not have to waste your time preparing the meal also an hour washing the dishes. For instance, in certain places, at weekends or holidays, you can see crowds waiting outside restaurants, waiting for a table. At some of the restaurants, you can not find a table, unless you have reserved one in advance. On the other hand, it could be perilous and costly. Food in the restaurant invariably tends to be overpriced, while you can cook it at home with the same ingredients and more affordable. Moreover, the most dangerous problem is if you get a meal outside on regular basis, it will lead to numerous diseases such as obesity, heart attack. the reason is you can not know where the source of nutrients comes from or how they preserve the ingredients. It is evident that the proportion of people who become overweight is dramatically increased because they ate too much sugar and calories In conclusion, eating out can be advantageous if you can control it. However, you should be careful with the food you eat when you dine out at the restaurant

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