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facebook is benefit for everyone

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some
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people
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so
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the person around them
. This is logical and unmistakable. However
, instead
 of allowing the media to control our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 and actions, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 us take control of it. It will be a valuable web for us to amuse ourselves and relieve strain in our academics and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
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use
 it appropriately
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