There is an increase of noise in our daily lives now a days? Why this is a problem? What can be done? v.1
There is an increase of noise in our daily lives now a days? Why this is a problem? What can be done? v. 1
Fashion has changed drastically from how it used to be years before now, and people do not want to feel left out in this change, so they begin to follow and dress accordingly to the latest fashion trends. People are influenced by the desire to feel confident in themselves and also because of the influence of their favourite celebrities. In my opinion, it is a bad thing.
One of the main reasons influencing the need to follow latest fashion trends is the desire to feel confident. Wearing latest clothes and hairdos could make some people confident in themselves, as they would be admired by others and also complimented. Compliments have a way of boosting people's morale. For example, a fashionable woman tends to receive a lot of compliments from both genders. Thus, making her feel like she is on top of the world. Another reason why people follow fashion trends is because they are influenced by their favourite celebrities. Many celebrities create fashion trends and their fan would follow these trends because it was created by their favourite. To illustrate, a fan of Beyonce, a female musician, could dress up like her because she is her favourite celebrity.
Following fashion trends could bring adverse effects on people's lives. Firstly, following latest trends is not cheap. Therefore, people buy clothes, shoes, make hairdos that are above their budget and tend to borrow money from friends, family members and even the bank to pay off their debts. Finally, it is time-consuming. Most people complain about the time spent following trends, looking for the latest fashion online and in shopping malls. Some people can spend a whole day trying to find the latest clothes. For instance, parents complain about the time spent by teenagers and young adults in malls and online shopping sites, just to purchase some fashion items.
In conclusion, in some countries, its citizens religiously follow the latest fashion trends because they are influenced by their favourite celebrities and also to feel confident. But, in my opinion, this has adverse effects in their lives.
Fashion
has
changed
drastically
from how it
used
to be years
before
now
, and
people
do not want to
feel
left
out in this
change
,
so
they
begin
to
follow
and dress
accordingly
to the latest
fashion
trends
.
People
are influenced
by the desire to
feel
confident
in themselves and
also
because
of the influence of their
favourite
celebrities
. In my opinion, it is a
bad
thing.
One of the main reasons influencing the need to
follow
latest
fashion
trends
is the desire to
feel
confident
. Wearing latest clothes and hairdos could
make
some
people
confident
in themselves, as they would
be admired
by others and
also
complimented. Compliments have a way of boosting
people
's morale.
For example
, a fashionable woman tends to receive
a lot of
compliments from both genders.
Thus
, making her
feel
like she is on top of the world. Another reason why
people
follow
fashion
trends
is
because
they
are influenced
by their
favourite
celebrities
.
Many
celebrities
create
fashion
trends
and their fan would
follow
these
trends
because
it
was created
by their
favourite
. To illustrate, a fan of
Beyonce
, a female musician, could dress up like her
because
she is her
favourite
celebrity.
Following
fashion
trends
could bring adverse effects on
people
's
lives
.
Firstly
, following latest
trends
is not
cheap
.
Therefore
,
people
buy
clothes, shoes,
make
hairdos that are above their budget and tend to borrow money from friends, family members and even the bank to pay off their debts.
Finally
, it is time-consuming. Most
people
complain about the time spent following
trends
, looking for the latest
fashion
online and in shopping malls.
Some
people
can spend a whole day trying to find the latest clothes.
For instance
, parents complain about the time spent by
teenagers
and young adults in malls and online shopping sites,
just
to
purchase
some
fashion
items.
In conclusion
, in
some
countries, its citizens
religiously
follow
the latest
fashion
trends
because
they
are influenced
by their
favourite
celebrities
and
also
to
feel
confident
.
But
, in my opinion, this has adverse effects in their
lives
.
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