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Nowadays, the development of modern lifestyle in the glob has provided significant access to all types of goods from different regions. Yet, there remains a controversial debate whether overall efficiency of this phenomenon can be benevolent or it can result in excruciatingly destructive consequences. This essay will discuss the proposed topic from both sides of view with some detailed explanations. Firstly, these criteria is able to make people's life more convenient. This is an indisputable fact that the possibility of buying some special commodities from other countries that are hard to find in one's nation can improve the living standards in that place. For instance, being able to purchase high-tech devices produced by limited nations can significantly promote the living standards in another location, which can be a beneficial factor in provoking people's enthusiasm toward the modern world; also, people will have the strength to make better communication with that region since they understand the cultural background of that nation by using their products. Consequently, this is a positive trend to be capable of buying other country's goods without border limitation. On the other hand, the quality of a commodity can be affected negatively in another country. As a matter of fact, ease of a product's availability from other nations can not mean the same characteristics as the producing nation. As a salient example, there are some agricultural products in some regions that are classified at different rates; however, the low rate products will be exported to other destinations that can be a political policy, while these products experience high prices that make them unapproachable for the majority of people. Furthermore, the same good of other places can not be a way to evaluate the quality of that thing. In conclusion, I once again reaffirm that the capability of buying various things in your nation can result in various benefits and drawbacks; meanwhile, I strongly believe that its disadvantages outweigh its pros. Additionally, I highly recommend establishing some rules about the quality of the products being exported to other nations to make their accessibility worthy.
Nowadays, the development of modern lifestyle in the glob has provided significant access to all types of
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goods
from
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different
regions.
Yet
, there remains a controversial debate whether
overall
efficiency of this phenomenon can be benevolent or it can result in
excruciatingly
destructive consequences. This essay will discuss the proposed topic from both sides of view with
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some
detailed explanations.

Firstly
, these criteria is able to
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make
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people
's life more convenient. This is an indisputable fact that the possibility of buying
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some
special commodities from
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other
countries that are
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hard
to find in one's
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nation
can
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improve
the living standards in that place.
For instance
, being able to
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purchase
high-tech devices produced by limited
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nations
can
significantly
promote the living standards in another location, which can be a beneficial factor in provoking
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people
's enthusiasm toward the modern world;
also
,
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people
will have the strength to
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make
better communication with that region since they understand the cultural background of that
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nation
by using their
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products
.
Consequently
, this is a
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positive
trend to be capable of buying
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other
country's
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goods
without border limitation.

On the
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other
hand, the quality of a commodity can be
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affected
negatively
in another country. As a matter of fact,
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ease
of a product's availability from
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other
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nations
can not mean the same characteristics as the producing
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nation
. As a salient example, there are
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some
agricultural
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products
in
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some
regions that
are classified
at
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different
rates;
however
, the low rate
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products
will
be exported
to
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other
destinations that can be a political policy, while these
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products
experience high prices that
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make
them unapproachable for the majority of
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people
.
Furthermore
, the same
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good
of
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other
places can not be a way to evaluate the quality of that thing.

In conclusion
, I once again reaffirm that the capability of buying various things in your
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nation
can result in various benefits and drawbacks; meanwhile, I
strongly
believe that its disadvantages outweigh its pros.
Additionally
, I
highly
recommend establishing
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some
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rules
about the quality of the
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products
being exported
to
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other
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nations
to
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make
their accessibility worthy.
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IELTS essay there is an important thing such a thing is not a problem as a contradiction is not

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
345 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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