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More people are shopping online today than ever before.why do people choose to shop this way?Are there any disadvantages to shopping online? Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

More people are shopping online today than ever before. why do people choose to shop this way? Are there any disadvantages to shopping online? Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 8G5Mr

With advancement of technology online shopping has become a trend among people of all age groups. Many people are preferring to shop online than physical shopping BECAUSE OF AVAILABILITY OF VARIETY IN PRODUCTS AND EASY PAYMENT OPTIONS. But there are some negative points to it ALSO. THIS ESSAY WILL LOOK INTO BOTH THE SIDES OF ONLINE SHOPPING. ON POSITIVE SIDE, Although, there are several advantages like it offers vast variety of options to shop from as well as you can make payments through debit and credit cards and other payment options it doesnot require physical cash. Also you can shop from any where no matter where you are present, so you can shop from your office or home. EXAMPLE ON NEGATIVE SIDE, But as we all know everything comes with some disadvantages as well. It sometimes disappoints you with what arrive at your door. It differs from size or colour or something else which is different from what you have ordered. Also some websites offers you tempting discounts to fool you. EXAMPLE From all this we can conclude that shopping online can be useful many times but we should shop wisely and that it doesn't create a mess to ourselves later.

With advancement of technology You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 shopping has become a trend among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of all age groups. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
The verb 'preferring' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are preferring
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
Use "onliner" to make a comparison with this adjective.onliner
online
 than physical shopping This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
BECAUSE
 OF AVAILABILITY OF VARIETY IN PRODUCTS AND EASY PAYMENT OPTIONS. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 points to it ALSO
. THIS ESSAY WILL LOOK INTO BOTH THE SIDES OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
ONLINE
 SHOPPING.

ON This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
POSITIVE
 SIDE, Although, there are several advantages like it offers vast variety of options to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 from as well
 as you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 payments through debit and credit cards and other payment options it Possible spelling mistake found.doe snotdoes not
doesnot
 require physical cash. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 you can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 from Did you mean "anywhere"?anywhere
any where
 no matter where you are present, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 from your office or home. EXAMPLE

ON This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
NEGATIVE
 SIDE, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 as we all know everything This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 disadvantages as well
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 disappoints you with what arrive at your door. It differs from size or Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 or something else which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from what you have ordered. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 websites offers you tempting discounts to fool you. EXAMPLE

From all this we can conclude that shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 can be useful This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we should You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
wisely
 and that it doesn't create a mess to ourselves later. 