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Many people belive that the violence in films causes a lot of social problems. What are the problems and how it can be reduced.

Many people belive that the violence in films causes a lot of social problems. What are the problems and how it can be reduced. BLJJd
ENTERTAINMENT FACTOR HAS A VITAL ROLE IN THE LIVES OF ORDINARY. HOWEVER, PEOPLE TEND TO BELIEVE THAT BRUTALITY IN MOVIES CREATES NUMEROUS ISSUES IN THE COMMUNITY. PERSONALLY, I FELT THE SAME WAY. FIRST OF ALL, PEOPLE TRY TO MIMIC CHARACTERS FROM MOVIES. IT IS A FACT THAT AFTER WATCHING A CERTAIN MOVIE, WE IMMITATE THEM IN FRONT OF OUR FRIENDS OR CERTAINLY IN OUR MINDS. THERE ARE CERTAIN WHO ARE GLUED TO NEGATIVE CHARACTERS ALONG WITH THEIR METHODS THEREBY, UNDERTAKING SUCH MEASURE TO COMMIT A CRIME. FOR INSTANCE, A MALAYALAM MOVIE DRISHVAM PROVIDE WITH A CLEAR PICTURE IN THIS FILM, THE LEAD ACTOR WAS AN ADDICT IN MOVIES AND SUDDENLY BECOMES A LUNATIC WITH THE KNOWLEDGE ACQUIRED FROM THOSE, FURTHERMORE, ENABLED TO PULL HIMSELF FROM THE INVESTIGATION. THIS EVIDENCE PROVES THE INFLUENCE IT HAVE ON US. ON THE CONTRARY, THEY COULD BE SUPRESSED IN MANY WAYS CITIZENS SHOULD MENTALLY ACCEPT IT AS ENTERTAINMENT PURPOSE. MOREOVER, IT SHOULD BE SHOWN IN CINEMA THEATRE WITH SUFFICIENT WARNINGS. IF PEOPLE ARE CONTINUING, THEN THEY SHOULD BE PUNISHED SEVERELY. FOR EXAMPLE, AT THE END OF A MOVIE, IF THE CAST THEMSELVES GIVE SUCH ADVISORY IT COULD BE POSSIBLE TO CLEAR THE SOCIETY. UPON THAT, STRICT ACTION SHOULD BE DEPLOYED IN AGE PREFERENCE MATTER. MOST OF INDUVIDUALS VISIT THEATRES ALONG THEIR FAMILY EVEN THOUGH THE CERTIFICATES ARE PROVIDED IN ADVERTISEMENT. CHILDREN'S ARE INFLUENCED COMMONLY, THUS, BY ASSESSING THESE SITUATION, IT CAN BE RESOLVED. TO CONCLUDE, I STRONGLY SUGGEST TO CONSULT A PSYCHIATRIST EVERY MONTH S0 THAT THEY COULD HELP MENTALLY AND PHYSICALLY SO THAT WE COULD PROVIDE A BETTER FUTURE FOR NEXT GENERATION.
ENTERTAINMENT FACTOR HAS A VITAL ROLE IN THE
LIVES
OF ORDINARY.
HOWEVER
,
PEOPLE
TEND TO BELIEVE THAT BRUTALITY IN
MOVIES
CREATES NUMEROUS ISSUES IN THE COMMUNITY.
PERSONALLY
, I FELT THE SAME WAY.

FIRST OF ALL
,
PEOPLE
TRY TO MIMIC CHARACTERS FROM
MOVIES
. IT IS A FACT THAT AFTER WATCHING A CERTAIN
MOVIE
, WE
IMMITATE
THEM IN FRONT OF OUR FRIENDS OR
CERTAINLY
IN OUR MINDS. THERE ARE CERTAIN WHO
ARE GLUED
TO
NEGATIVE
CHARACTERS ALONG WITH THEIR METHODS THEREBY, UNDERTAKING SUCH MEASURE TO COMMIT A CRIME.
FOR INSTANCE
, A MALAYALAM
MOVIE
DRISHVAM
PROVIDE WITH A
CLEAR
PICTURE IN THIS FILM, THE LEAD ACTOR WAS AN ADDICT IN
MOVIES
AND
SUDDENLY
BECOMES A LUNATIC WITH THE KNOWLEDGE ACQUIRED FROM THOSE,
FURTHERMORE
, ENABLED TO PULL HIMSELF FROM THE INVESTIGATION. THIS EVIDENCE PROVES THE INFLUENCE IT HAVE ON US.

ON THE CONTRARY
, THEY COULD BE
SUPRESSED
IN
MANY
WAYS CITIZENS SHOULD MENTALLY ACCEPT IT AS ENTERTAINMENT PURPOSE.
MOREOVER
, IT SHOULD
BE SHOWN
IN CINEMA
THEATRE
WITH SUFFICIENT WARNINGS. IF
PEOPLE
ARE CONTINUING, THEN THEY SHOULD
BE PUNISHED
SEVERELY
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, AT THE
END
OF A
MOVIE
, IF THE CAST THEMSELVES GIVE SUCH ADVISORY IT COULD BE POSSIBLE TO
CLEAR
THE SOCIETY.

UPON THAT, STRICT ACTION SHOULD
BE DEPLOYED
IN AGE PREFERENCE MATTER. MOST OF
INDUVIDUALS
VISIT
THEATRES
ALONG THEIR FAMILY
EVEN THOUGH
THE CERTIFICATES
ARE PROVIDED
IN ADVERTISEMENT. CHILDREN'S
ARE INFLUENCED
COMMONLY
,
THUS
, BY ASSESSING
THESE SITUATION
, IT CAN
BE RESOLVED
.

TO CONCLUDE
, I
STRONGLY
SUGGEST TO CONSULT
A PSYCHIATRIST EVERY MONTH S0 THAT THEY COULD
HELP
MENTALLY AND
PHYSICALLY
SO
THAT WE COULD PROVIDE A BETTER FUTURE FOR
NEXT
GENERATION.
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IELTS essay Many people belive that the violence in films causes a lot of social problems. What are the problems and how it can be reduced.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
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