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There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your opinion and solutions.

There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your opinion and solutions. mLDb1
There is a fashion of rising growth of consumable items that is leading towards causing environmental issues. The main reason behind this is the amount of plastic used in packaging of these materials. Secondly, most of the products are not re-usable. As per my idea there should be an alternative eco-friendly wrapping solutions. In today’s world 90% of the usable products manufactured are being wrapped in Plastic. As per the scientific research plastics are considered to be most dangerous to the environment as it takes hundreds of years to get dissolve or in some cases there still remain creating an addition to the global challenges. For example, all the packed foods like chips, biscuits, etc. mainly eatables are heavily consumed by young generation and the waste is left over in the surroundings. To resolve this disaster, we need to find a way to recycle or reuse the material. Use and throw is the motto or slogan as per the needs of the population. In this hectic schedule and also considering rise in travel of the individuals, there is tremendous increase in the production of easy to pack goods or one time use items. After consumption the package is just a waste and it is non-recyclable or remains unused. For instance, Ready to cook food delivered in plastic package. As per the recent explorations researchers have found plastic at the depth of the oceans beds where humans have not even visited, this is really alarming. We definitely need an alternative to this plastic goods for a better tomorrow. To conclude, reducing the use of plastics or making it reusable is the only way out. One of the alternative is the use of paper packing, which most of the industries have already started looking into and replacing paper with plastic. Also it’s our responsibility to conserve our planet by reducing the use of plastic. Even government bodies are coming up with the sayings like “Say no to plastic”
There is a fashion of rising growth of consumable items
that is
leading towards causing environmental issues. The main reason behind this is the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
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used
in packaging of these materials.
Secondly
, most of the products are not re-usable.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
per my
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idea
there should be an alternative eco-friendly wrapping solutions.

In
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today
’s world 90% of the usable products manufactured are
being wrapped
in
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Plastic
. As per the scientific research
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plastics
are considered
to be most
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dangerous
to the environment as it takes hundreds of years to
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get
dissolve or in
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some
cases there
still
remain creating an addition to the global challenges.
For example
, all the packed foods like chips, biscuits, etc.
mainly
eatables are
heavily
consumed by young generation and the waste is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
over in the surroundings. To resolve this disaster, we need to find a way to recycle or reuse the material.

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Use
and throw is the motto or slogan as per the needs of the population. In this hectic schedule and
also
considering rise in travel of the individuals, there is tremendous increase in the production of easy to pack
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goods
or one time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
items. After consumption the package is
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just
a waste and it is non-recyclable or remains unused.
For instance
, Ready to cook food delivered in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
package. As per the recent explorations researchers have found
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
at the depth of the oceans beds where humans have not even visited, this is
really
alarming. We definitely need an alternative to this
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plastic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
for a better tomorrow.

To conclude
, reducing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
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plastics
or making it reusable is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way out. One of
the alternative is
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of paper packing, which most of the industries have already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
looking into and replacing paper with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
it’s our responsibility to conserve our planet by reducing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
. Even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
bodies are coming up with the sayings like “Say no to plastic
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IELTS essay There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your opinion and solutions.

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