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the importance of learning english

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Back to colonial times, the British Empire covered around 25% of the Earth’s surface and made English become the most dominating language throughout the world. English, nowadays, is still widely used as the language of international communication and is being spoken by a fifth of the world’s population. There are several reasons why it is important to learn English, and I will explain those reasons in more detail. First of all, English is the main business language. Presently, many multinational companies require their employees to be fluent in English and make it their official language. In addition, the language is commonly used in many cross-border business meetings, which helps companies from all over the world effectively co-operate with each others. As a result, studying English assures/guarantees the better career prospects. Secondly, travelling is just a piece of cake (=easy) with good knowlegde of English. Visitors/ Tourists can easily ask for help in English wherever they go, since the language is generally used in over 100 countries. Supposing that a Portugese tourist has a vacation in Thailand and finds it’s hard to communicate with the local in Portugese, he or she would find it’s much easier to start a conversation and ask for a favor (=ask for help) in English. Having a good command of/ (being fluent in) English also provides visitors great opportunity to make friends with people coming from different walks of life and to immerse into the local cultures. It’s can be seen/(It’s obvious) that English greatly helps to ease the communication burden and to make travelling much more delightful/ much easier. Lastly, English offers people unlimited access to not only invaluable sources of knowlegde but also a wonderful world of entertainment. Thoroughly, a lot of schools and universities worldwide offer English programs. Also, many scientific papers and research are published in English. Besides, many famous forms of entertainment such as books, movies, and music are produced in or translated into English. With good understanding of English, citizens can easily get access to different cultures. A good example of impacts of English on cultural diffusion is the case of Vietnamese artists. By releasing music videos with English subtitles, the local artists are able to actively spread the Vietnamese heritage values and make a huge number of international fans gain further insights of Vietnamese Culture. Thanks to the mentioned reasons, English obviuosly plays important/crucial role in our everyday life. It is undeniable that our world is an English-speaking world and proficiency in English will surely bring about many benefits for the speakers. Therefore, it’s really vital to learn English.
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. English, nowadays, is
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population. There are several reasons why it is
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.
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,
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multinational
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companies
require their employees to be fluent in English and
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make
it their official
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language
.
In addition
, the
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language
is
commonly
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used
in
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many
cross-border business meetings, which
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helps
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companies
from all over the
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world
effectively
co-operate with each
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others
.
As a result
, studying English assures/guarantees the better career prospects.

Secondly
, travelling is
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just
a piece of cake (=easy) with
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good
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knowlegde
of English. Visitors/ Tourists can
easily
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ask for
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help
in English wherever they go, since the
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language
is
generally
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used
in over 100 countries. Supposing that a
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tourist has a vacation in Thailand and finds it’s
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hard
to communicate with the local in
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, he or she would find it’s much easier to
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start
a conversation and
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ask for
a favor (=
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ask for
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help)
in English. Having a
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good
command of/ (being fluent in) English
also
provides visitors great opportunity to
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make
friends with
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people
coming from
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different
walks of life and to immerse into the local cultures. It’s can be
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seen
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greatly
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helps
to
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ease
the communication burden and to
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make
travelling much more delightful/ much easier.

Lastly
, English offers
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people
unlimited access to not
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only
invaluable sources of
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of entertainment.
Thoroughly
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schools and universities worldwide offer English programs.
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,
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scientific papers and research
are published
in English.
Besides
,
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famous
forms of entertainment such as books, movies, and music
are produced
in or translated into English. With
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good
understanding of English, citizens can
easily
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get
access to
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different
cultures. A
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good
example of impacts of English on cultural diffusion is the case of Vietnamese artists. By releasing music videos with English subtitles, the local artists are able to
actively
spread the Vietnamese heritage values and
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make
a huge number of international fans gain
further
insights of Vietnamese Culture.

Thanks to the mentioned reasons, English
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obviuosly
plays
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important
/crucial role in our everyday life. It is undeniable that our
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world
is an English-speaking
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world
and proficiency in English will
surely
bring about
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many
benefits for the speakers.
Therefore
, it’s
really
vital to learn English.
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IELTS essay the importance of learning english

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
430 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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