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Car ownership has raise so fastly in last 30 years that many cities in the world are now big traffic jam :which things goverments should have to discourage people from using their cars.

Car ownership has raise so fastly in last 30 years that many cities in the world are now big traffic jam: which things goverments should have to discourage people from using their cars. K0qG3

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