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there is a tradition in Asia of treating your partner with the respect you would accord a guest, and some people said that reverence is the nature of human love. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

there is a tradition in Asia of treating your partner with the respect you would accord a guest, and some people said that reverence is the nature of human love. ORGM7
It is true that obeisance is the foundation of human love's formation. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement by the following reasons. I entirely agree with the idea that residents should treat their companies with all credit. Initially, respecting inhabitants plays a vital role in stimulating moral standards in any society. Furthermore, the level of revering individuals is absolutely the level of showing how civilized people are. For example, take Taylor as an example, after fingding out her fan was homeless, and pregnant for eight months, she made a great effort to help her fan buy a house last year. Not only do she have a high regard for somone that pay attention and love her, but also, she has a heart of gold. More importanly, there would be a case that every country have contructed a plenty of status with the purpose enhancing the contribution of former presidents or national heroes until now. Apart from the pratical concerns expressed above, there are other reasons should be discussed. Because of the promotion of modern technology, dwellers are may increasingly heartless and do not pay more attention to what happens around them. Therefore, hencing highly honor would possitively be a springbroadfor retricting bad behaviors that people do to others. For instance, President Putin can be taken as a good illutration, he denied having an umbrella when it was heavy raining in funeral of anonymous verterants two years ago. In conclusion, for the reasons meantioned above, I firmly approve of the view that reverence is the nature of human love.
It is true that obeisance is the foundation of human
love
's formation. I
wholeheartedly
agree
with this statement by the following reasons.

I
entirely
agree
with the
idea
that residents should treat their
companies
with all credit.
Initially
, respecting inhabitants plays a vital role in stimulating moral standards in any society.
Furthermore
, the level of revering individuals is
absolutely
the level of showing how civilized
people
are.
For example
, take Taylor as an example, after
fingding
out her fan was homeless, and pregnant for eight months, she made a great effort to
help
her fan
buy
a
house
last year. Not
only
do
she
have
a high regard for
somone
that pay attention and
love
her,
but
also
, she has a heart of gold. More
importanly
, there would be a case that every country have
contructed
a
plenty
of status with the purpose enhancing the contribution of former presidents or national heroes until
now
.

Apart from the
pratical
concerns expressed above, there are other reasons should
be discussed
.
Because
of the promotion of modern technology, dwellers are may
increasingly
heartless and do not pay more attention to what happens around them.
Therefore
,
hencing
highly
honor would
possitively
be a
springbroadfor
retricting
bad
behaviors that
people
do to others.
For instance
, President Putin can
be taken
as a
good
illutration
, he denied having an umbrella when it was heavy raining in funeral of anonymous
verterants
two years ago.

In conclusion
, for the reasons
meantioned
above, I
firmly
approve of the view that reverence is the nature of human
love
.
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IELTS essay there is a tradition in Asia of treating your partner with the respect you would accord a guest, and some people said that reverence is the nature of human love.

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