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The plan provides information about redevelopment of southwest airport in the next year.

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The plan provides information about redevelopment of southwest airport in the next year. Overall, after reconstruction territory will sprawl, and new features will add. The first major change is increasing in number of gates more than twice, from 8 to 18. Also, the walkway zone near the gates will demolish and new sky train area will construct here. Some new shops will appear next to security room. Departure room will have an extra exit, and café will replace from the top-right corner to bottom-left, like check-in, which relocates to another side of a room. There are some changes in arrivals room too, like extra exit in the right corner an extra space for car hiring. New café will appears in the right top corner and ATM next to the café.
The plan provides information about redevelopment of southwest airport in the
next
year.

Overall
, after reconstruction territory will sprawl, and
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new
features will
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add
.

The
first
major
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change
is increasing in number of gates more than twice, from 8 to 18.
Also
, the walkway zone near the gates will demolish and
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new
sky train area will construct here.
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Some
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new
shops will appear
next
to security room.

Departure room will have an extra exit, and café will replace from the top-right corner to bottom-
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left
, like
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check
-in, which relocates to another side of a room.

There are
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some
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changes
in arrivals room too, like extra exit in the right corner an extra space for car hiring.
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New
café will appears in the right top corner and ATM
next
to the café.

IELTS essay The plan provides information about redevelopment of southwest airport in the next year.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
130 words
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