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An ambition you haven't achieved

An ambition you haven't achieved G9alL

Well, fat belly is always of the top concerns of all women in this whole world, and I am not of an exception. So, for the next 3 years, I am planning to do some physical exercises to get toned and make my body into good shape, looking for a prospect of getting a slim body, which would definitely make others green with envy. I’ve planned to achieve this objective carefully. I asked my friends, who are in physical training courses, for advice on which kind of exercises I should take. I carried out some research, too. Then, I found out that I should practice squat, and sit-up. I installed an app in my mobile phone, which helps me keep track of my practice and give me some certain advice provided by a professional trainer. Unfortunately, I couldn’t persist in this practice for too long as in the first day, I was so eager that I practice squat too much, which caused muscle’s tension. Thus, I had to rest for some days after, which lowered my motivation. Finally, after those days, I gradually gave up on my practice and my belly continued to grow. Admittedly, it was really a shame to me as I thought I could achieve that goal.

Well, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 belly is always of the top concerns of all women in this whole world, and I am not of an exception. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, for the next
 3 years, I am planning to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 physical exercises to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 toned and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my body into This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 shape, looking for a prospect of getting a slim body, which would definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 others green with envy.

I’ve planned to achieve this objective carefully
. I asked my friends, who are in physical training courses, for advice on which kind of exercises I should take. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 carried out This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 research, too. Then, I found out that I should You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuseproceedingformhabitprocesssystem
practice
 squat, and sit-up. I installed an app in my mobile phone, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuseproceedingformhabitprocesssystem
practice
 and give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 certain advice provided by a professional trainer.

Unfortunately, I couldn’t persist in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuseproceedingformhabitprocesssystem
practice
 for too long as in the first
 day, I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 eager that I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuseproceedingformhabitprocesssystem
practice
 squat too much, which caused muscle’s tension. Thus
, I had to rest for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 days after, which lowered my motivation. Finally
, after those days, I gradually
 gave up on my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuseproceedingformhabitprocesssystem
practice
 and my belly continued to grow. Admittedly
, it was really
 a shame to me as I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 I could achieve that goal. 