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there have been many advances in technology over the past fifty years

there have been many advances in technology over the past fifty years YwGxj

Technological advancements have improved the way human interact and communicate each other who live in a long distance. There are some obvious differences between methods of communication at present stage compare to those used in the past. To begin with, the speed to transmit a piece of information has been advanced. This is the big change in communication today. For instance, It just take a few second to receive a message or an email from sender, and the receivers read it immediately. It is extremely beneficial for working and studying process. In comparison, in the past, It took many time even up to one month for a letter reach its destination.

Technological advancements have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 the way human interact and communicate each other who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in a long distance. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 obvious differences between methods of communication at present stage compare to those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in the past. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the speed to transmit a piece of information has been advanced
. This is the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. For instance
, It This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Did you mean "takes"?takes
take
 a Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: "few seconds".few seconds
few second
 to receive a message or an email from sender, and the receivers read it immediately. It is extremely
 beneficial for working and studying process. In comparison
, in the past, It took Did you mean "many times" or "much time"?many timesmuch time
many time
 even up to one month for a letter reach its destination. 