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Increase flights in the world

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some people use more to travel through airway in the world for holiday, work and commercial porposes in recent years. No can one deny, according to me the benfit is that we can travel easy to go anywhere and disadvantage is that so, the flight tickets rate is to mush high so then the both advantages and limitation are with the flights In the begning through the airway we can easy cover the long distance in few time and that is the best option to export and import the good. to explainly, the large number of goods amount transfer one place to another place in single time. For example, researchers research that the 63 percent people give prefrence to flight for travel and 37 percent peple to give other modes of transpot. result is that airway cover the long time distance in few hours Secondly, the price of ticket of airway is to mush high as compare to other modes. some people never use airways for the reason of ticket price. some time, when the weather is not clear then airway schedule change and canceled flights and airway is consumed a huge quantity of feul result is that, airway is cause of pollution and globalisation Conclusion, in the airway both are prons and cons. we can travel easily through airway or it is way of transport and the imition is that so it not eco friendly
some
people
use
more to
travel
through airway in the world for holiday, work and commercial
porposes
in recent years. No can one deny, according to me the
benfit
is that we can
travel
easy to go anywhere and disadvantage is that
so
, the flight tickets rate is to mush high
so
then the both advantages and limitation are with the
flights


In the
begning
through the airway we can
easy
cover the long distance in few
time
and
that is
the best option to export and import the
good
.
to
explainly
, the large number of
goods
amount transfer one place to another place in single
time
.
For example
, researchers research that the 63 percent
people
give
prefrence
to flight for
travel
and 37 percent
peple
to give other modes of
transpot
.
result
is that airway cover the long
time
distance in few
hours


Secondly
, the price of ticket of airway is to mush high as compare to other modes.
some
people
never
use
airways for the reason of ticket price.
some
time
, when the weather is not
clear
then airway schedule
change
and canceled flights and airway
is consumed
a huge quantity of
feul
result is that, airway is cause of pollution and
globalisation


Conclusion, in the airway both are
prons
and cons.
we
can
travel
easily
through airway or it is way of transport and the
imition
is that
so
it not
eco friendly
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IELTS essay Increase flights in the world

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