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There aren't many houses to accommodate people so it has several social consequenses. Only th egovernment can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree pr disagree?

There aren't many houses to accommodate people so it has several social consequenses. Only th egovernment can solve this problem. 85nnx
As overpopulation is the main problem in most of the cities, there are no sufficient houses for shelter and there are a lot of social problems too. Only with the help of the government, we would be able to overcome this problem. I agree that the government can help overcome this issue by taking proper measures. Firstly, we believe that the government plays an important role in people's lives. when we as an individual cannot solve a problem on our own, we will have to depend on the government. Overpopulation is one of the biggest problems in our society which makes it difficult to accommodate houses for the people in need. In earlier days, the population in the country or cities was less and also people used to stay in individual houses as there was a lot of space available. It is not possible now because of the increased population. Furthermore, the government can sue their finances in expanding the city so that more people can get accommodation. Even if the population is controlled, there will be a requirement of additional buildings or houses that can be accommodated to the people. In order to do this, there must be proper planning and investments at the same time. thus, the government can be a perfect authority to solve this problem. In conclusion, we can say that, as the population increases the cities should also grow accordingly, and this can be only done by the government, by taking suitable measures.
As overpopulation is the main
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problem
in most of the
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cities
, there are no sufficient
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houses
for shelter and there are
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a lot of
social
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problems
too.
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with the
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help
of the
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government
, we would be able to overcome this
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problem
. I
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agree
that the
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government
can
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help
overcome this issue by taking proper measures.

Firstly
, we believe that the
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government
plays an
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important
role in
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people
's
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lives
.
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when
we as an individual cannot solve a
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problem
on our
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own
, we will
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have to
depend on the
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government
. Overpopulation is one of the biggest
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problems
in our society which
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makes
it difficult to accommodate
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houses
for the
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people
in need. In earlier days, the population in the country or
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cities
was less and
also
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people
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used
to stay in individual
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houses
as there was
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a lot of
space available. It is not possible
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now
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because
of the increased population.

Furthermore
, the
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government
can sue their finances in expanding the city
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so
that more
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people
can
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get
accommodation. Even if the population
is controlled
, there will be a requirement of additional buildings or
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houses
that can
be accommodated
to the
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people
. In order to do this, there
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must
be proper planning and investments at the same time.
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thus
, the
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government
can be a perfect authority to solve this problem.

In conclusion
, we can say that, as the population increases the
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cities
should
also
grow
accordingly
, and this can be
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only
done by the
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government
, by taking suitable measures.
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IELTS essay There aren't many houses to accommodate people so it has several social consequenses. Only th egovernment can solve this problem.

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