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There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other in this day and age

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There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other in this day and age. It is easy to see that life is more complex and difficult. Firstly, the cost of living has increased so dramatically. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. BéProperty prices are higher than ever. Without help, it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. People seem to be more ambitious nowadays. They want a better quality of life for their families. +Both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care.

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 that we are more dependent on each other in this day and age. It is easy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that life is more complex and difficult. Firstly
, the cost of living has increased This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
dramatically
. For example
, young adults tend to rely on their parents for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 when buying a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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BéProperty
 prices are higher than ever. Without This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
, it would be impossible for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to pay a deposit and a mortgage. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 seem to be more ambitious nowadays. They want a better quality of life for their families. +Both parents usually
 need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care. 