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There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center and a new one with some changes for the future.

There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center and a new one with some changes for the future. RN0RV

The two plans illustrate how a sports center at university will be renovated in the coming years. (17 words) Overall, many sports facilities will be constructed and the layout will witness dramatic changes. (14 words) As can be seen, in the present university sports center's layout, two outdoor courts are located on the left and right-hand sides of the central building respectively. Likewise, in the central building, a 25-meter pool is surrounded by a changing room on the west, a seating place on the east, a reception on the south and a gym on the north that except for gym that will be expended toward the east, other sections will be amazingly untouched in the future layout. (82 words) In the future layout, two changing rooms will be built on in the left and right-hand side corners that the former is adjacent to a sports shop and the latter is beside a cafe. The eastern outdoor courts are going to be replaced with a sports hall that is next to the seating place and also two equal dancing studios on the right-hand side. While the other outdoor courts will be demolished and a spacious leisure pool will be replaced. (80 words) Overall 193 words

The two plans illustrate how a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 center at university will be renovated
 in the coming years. (17 words)

Overall
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facilities will be constructed
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintmapdesignchartgeography
layout
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changes
. (14 words)

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, in the present university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 center's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintmapdesignchartgeography
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, two outdoor courts are located
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left
 and right-hand sides of the central building respectively
. Likewise
, in the central building, a 25-meter pool is surrounded
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except for
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 toward the east, other sections will be amazingly
 untouched in the future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintmapdesignchartgeography
layout
. (82 words)

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layout
, two changing rooms will be built
 on in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 and right-hand side corners that the former is adjacent to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 shop and the latter is beside a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. The eastern outdoor courts are going to be replaced
 with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall that is
next
 to the seating place and also
 two equal dancing studios on the right-hand side. While the other outdoor courts will be demolished
 and a spacious leisure pool will be replaced
. (80 words)

Overall
 193 words