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sending all criminals to prison would be a terrible idea. why?

sending all criminals to prison would be a terrible idea. why? 56kaN

- The concept of transferring all lawbreakers to a prison would not be a significant idea. This is because the vast majority of inmates are titled to lighter crimes than others. For instance, a person who had forgotten to use a signal when turning left while driving a car should have a warning from the officer instead of going to jail and got handcuffed. Law enforcement cannot handle the increasing number of prisoners and thus many problems might be faced such as, the inability to look after all of these prisoners as well as requiring more funds to maintain the prison.

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