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There are several reasons

There are several reasons 25MWA
There are several reasons why ________(Television is considered to be disadvantageous to society)______________. One of them is that _________(viewing of television can be a source of distraction in our life, turning away our focus from the more important things in life. )__________________. It can also be argued that _____(we tend to waste hours infront of the television instead of working on our goals and ambitions in life)______________. It should also be taken into account that____________(children at a young age spending too much time in front of the television, are missing out on opportunities for all around development)_______________________. Those who argue for _____(Television)_____ have a different view and say that it can be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that ______(Television can be a good source of information to learn new things if used correctly)_____________________________. Then, there are concerns about __________(people not viewing television to be unaware of current events and latest new around the world)____________________. While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that _______(Television usage is best avoided or minimized as we should focus on other productive tasks instead)_______________. I would strongly recommend that _____________(people view how much time they currently spend on watching Television and see how this time can be put to better use)_____________________
There are several reasons why
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________(Television
is considered
to be disadvantageous to society)______________. One of them is that _________(viewing of
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television
can be a source of distraction in our life, turning away our focus from the more
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important
things in life.
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)
__________________. It can
also
be argued
that _____(we tend to waste hours
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infront
of the
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television
instead
of working on our goals and ambitions in life)______________. It should
also
be taken
into account that____________(children at a young age spending too much time in front of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
, are missing out on opportunities for all around development)_______________________.

Those who argue for
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_____(Television)_____
have a
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different
view and say that it can be a
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good
thing.
Firstly
, it
is claimed
that
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______(Television
can be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
source of information to learn new things if
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used
correctly
)_____________________________. Then, there are concerns about __________(
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people
not viewing
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television
to be unaware of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
and latest new around the world)____________________.

While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that
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_______(Television
usage is best avoided or minimized as we should focus on other productive tasks
instead
)_______________. I would
strongly
recommend that _____________(
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
view how much time they
currently
spend on watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Television
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
how this time can
be put
to better
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
)_____________________
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IELTS essay There are several reasons

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
214 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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