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There are now millions of cars on the road in most cities.Pollution from cars are the main problem that big cities facing today. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are now millions of cars on the road in most cities. Pollution from cars are the main problem that big cities facing today. PEY1d
Nowadays while a wide range of cars are available, there are some serious problems associated with car usage. It is often said that car pollution is the main problem in many giant cities while there are some minor problems caused by cars. I acknowledge that pollution is becoming increasingly global problem, but I believe that there are more vital problems that only cars are responsible for. On the one hand, considering pollution caused by cars as the most vital problem is justifiable for some reasons. First of all, greenhouse gases causing the climate change. For instance, world is facing global warming that caused by heated greenhouse emissions. Secondly, vehicle pollutants damaging fresh air in some cities. To illustrate, there is smog in some eastern countries, such as China, which makes it difficult to breathe. On the other hand, there are several matters that caused by cars and they should be considered as a principal problems. For example, the duration of traffic congestion is increasing gradually and government should take this problem into consideration as well. Furthermore, noise created by cars are also has negative effect on living conditions. To illustrate, some people in central cities who lives near the roads can sleep or have a rest due to the permanent and non-stop sounds caused by vehicles. To illustrate, while cars have some beneficial sides, they have negative impact in infrastructure of cities, especially in big cities. Although pollution made by this type of transportation is often said as significant problem, I believe that there are more considerable problems that caused by cars that should take under control
Nowadays while a wide range of
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are available, there are
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some
serious
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problems
associated with
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car
usage. It is
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often
said that
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car
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pollution
is the main
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problem
in
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many
giant
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cities
while there are
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some
minor
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problems
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caused
by
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cars
. I acknowledge that
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pollution
is becoming
increasingly
global
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problem
,
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but
I believe that there are more vital
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problems
that
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only
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cars
are responsible for. On the one hand, considering
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pollution
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caused
by
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cars
as the most vital
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problem
is justifiable for
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reasons.
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, greenhouse gases causing the climate
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change
.
For instance
, world is facing global warming that
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caused
by heated greenhouse emissions.
Secondly
, vehicle pollutants damaging fresh air in
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some
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cities
. To illustrate, there is smog in
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some
eastern countries, such as China, which
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makes
it difficult to breathe.
On the other hand
, there are several matters that
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caused
by
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cars and
they should
be considered
as a principal
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problems
.
For example
, the duration of traffic congestion is increasing
gradually
and
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government
should take this
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problem
into consideration
as well
.
Furthermore
, noise created by
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cars
are
also
has
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negative
effect on living conditions. To illustrate,
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some
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people
in central
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who
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lives
near the roads can sleep or have a rest due to the permanent and non-
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stop
sounds
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caused
by vehicles. To illustrate, while
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cars
have
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some
beneficial sides, they have
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negative
impact in infrastructure of
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cities
,
especially
in
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big
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cities
. Although
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pollution
made by this type of transportation is
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often
said as significant
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problem
, I believe that there are more considerable
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problems
that
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caused
by
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cars
that should take under
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control
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IELTS essay There are now millions of cars on the road in most cities. Pollution from cars are the main problem that big cities facing today.

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