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the difference between cowlick arts centre from 2005 to now

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The two pictures show and express the differences and develompent in structure and construction of Colwic Arts Centre from 2005 to now. As we can see, there is a lot of changing from past to now, including the expand of some buildings and plant trees in its wasteland. In the past, there was Snack Bar just in the upper left hand side of art centre right oposite of Meeting Room and a very big Concert Hall Cinema was in the middle of centre and there was two big Galleries in the right side of centre right next to each other. In 2005 a wasted land that was a very wide field in the bottom of Art Centre that had chenged now and turned into a jungle with a Stage in the center and outdoor Exhibition and Performance Area. Drama Studio added to the centre and one Mitting Room divided to two different part from past. In addition, a big Cinema added, but Information Desk had no changes from the past till now. The position of Toilet actually changed and moved to the right bottom side of the centre just next to the big Concert Hall Sinema. So, obviously there was a lot of changes and developments during this timespan.
The two pictures
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from 2005 to
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changing from
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now
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the expand
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buildings and plant trees in its wasteland.

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, there was Snack Bar
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side of art
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centre
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oposite
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Concert Hall Cinema was in the middle of
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Galleries in the
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centre
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and turned into a jungle with a Stage in the center and outdoor Exhibition and Performance Area. Drama Studio
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Cinema
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Information Desk had no
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changes
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till
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now
. The position of Toilet actually
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changed
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Concert Hall
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Sinema
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IELTS essay the difference between cowlick arts centre from 2005 to now

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209 words
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