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There are many reasons why people want to live in rural areas.

There are many reasons why people want to live in rural areas. GLYLw
Firstly, the rural area has a slower pace of living. For example, when people feel stress about working or studying, they can go to the paddy field with fresh and clean atmosphere to relax their mind. People who hate the fast pace of living in the city and want to escape from hustle and bustle can go to the rural areas. Secondly, the cost of living in rural area is much cheaper than in cities. This is because who live in rural area can buy cheaper food and pay low living expenses such as tuition fee and housing. The main breadwinner or workers can pay this cost of living. They do not work really hard to cover their living expenses.
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, the cost of
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is much cheaper than in cities. This is
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cheaper food and pay low
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expenses such as tuition fee and housing. The main breadwinner or workers can pay this cost of
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IELTS essay There are many reasons why people want to live in rural areas.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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