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Nowadays, celebrities are treated as unique pieces of art in movies and the media always follow them in public to get lots of information related to their lives. Fame is a crucial part of inference in their privacy. Although it impacts in positive or negative ways, which would be described in another paragraph. To embark with invasion in celebrities’ life is that media always follow them while they step out from their house and telecast it live on the television or social media. For instance, on television or social media, we could saw their every movement at any time because reporters are waiting outside their homes to capture them. It’s affecting their private life, they can walk outside freely and they are not able to use the local facilities surrounding them. Moreover, even when they go shopping then also media following them that in which shop or mall they are going in. Furthermore, getting fame of public or making fans finish their personal life because people wants to know about their routines. On the other hand, famous persons get more attention than normal people. Every citizen of the country knows them very well and give respect to them. However, they obtain this by struggling and working hard in cinemas. These people need to be strong and sometimes they could not eat junk food, even if they liked it that much. In gist, being celebrities & having fame is not easy as we saw, they got this by doing work, they also suffered like normal people, they have also been seen so many problems in their life. In my opinion, the media should have not allowed to follow them until they want. Let them enjoy their lives as normal humans.

Nowadays, celebrities are treated
 as unique pieces of art in movies and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 always follow them in public to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 lots of information related to their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. Fame is a crucial part of inference in their privacy. Although it impacts in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 ways, which would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizedportrayed
described
 in another paragraph.

To embark with invasion in celebrities’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 is that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 always follow them while they step out from their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and telecast it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 on the television or social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
. For instance
, on television or social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
, we could This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
saw
 their every movement at any time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 reporters are waiting outside their homes to capture them. It’s affecting their private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
, they can walk outside Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).freely, and
freely and
 they are not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the local facilities surrounding them. Moreover
, even when they go shopping then also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 following them that in which shop or mall they are going in.

Furthermore
, getting fame of public or making fans finish their personal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.want
wants
 to know about their routines. On the other hand
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 persons This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more attention than normal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. Every citizen of the country knows them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well and give respect to them. However
, they obtain this by struggling and working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 in cinemas. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 need to be strong and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 they could not eat junk food, even if they liked it that much.

In gist, being celebrities & having fame is not easy as we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 this by doing work, they also
 suffered like normal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, they have also
 been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems in their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. In my opinion, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 should have not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to follow them until they want. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 them enjoy their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 as normal humans. 