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There are many problems with pollution and damage to the environment in the world. The most pressing ones deal with the influence of different kinds of cars on the environment, rivers and seas contamination, and greenhouse gas emissions of factories.

There are many problems with pollution and damage to the environment in the world. The most pressing ones deal with the influence of different kinds of cars on the environment, rivers and seas contamination, and greenhouse gas emissions of factories. Ar5dl
There are many problems with pollution and damage to the environment in the world. The most pressing ones deal with the influence of different kinds of cars on the environment, rivers and seas contamination, and greenhouse gas emissions of factories. Firstly, the result of a transport’s work affects the ecology in a bad way. The pollution of the environment by exhaust fumes is the biggest problem in the world. In my humble opinion, this issue can be solved by limiting the increasing number of drivers. Secondly, rivers and seas pollution is very pressing, too. There are many sources of their contamination, for instance, oil transporting and accumulations of rubbish. I think that this problem will be partly solved if people pick up trash ashore. Finally, greenhouse gas emissions of factories are very dangerous for the environment, too. The reason for it is that these emissions may cause global warming. I suppose this issue can’t be solved because it will be necessary to remove all factories. It is unreal and unbeneficial. To summarize, even the most dangerous environmental problems can be solved, but their solution may take a long time. Part 2 3 «The most useful thing I have ever learned» People learn many things during the whole life. These things can be from different fields, for example, science, sport, TV. But only some of them can be called the most useful ones. So, I’d like to tell you about the most useful thing I have ever learned. In most cases, these things are different abilities. I have many of them as tying shoelaces, but the most useful one for me is the ability to cook. I learned it from my mother. It was when I first went to the seventh form grade/year. This skill is very helpful, indeed. Food that is prepared by you is healthy, so it’s very important to be able to cook if you take care of your health. Moreover, you can save some money by having this ability. To sum up, eating is very significant for us. Consequently, people won’t have an ordinary life without the ability to cook. So, it is the most useful thing that I have ever learned.
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with pollution and damage to the
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environment
in the world. The most pressing
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ones
deal with the influence of
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different
kinds of cars on the
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environment
, rivers and seas contamination, and greenhouse gas emissions of factories.

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bad
way. The pollution of the
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environment
by exhaust fumes is the biggest
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problem
in the world. In my humble opinion, this issue can be
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solved
by limiting the increasing number of drivers.

Secondly
, rivers and seas pollution is
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very
pressing, too. There are
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sources of their contamination,
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that this
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problem
will be partly
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if
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people
pick up trash ashore.

Finally
, greenhouse gas emissions of factories are
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dangerous
for the
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environment
, too. The reason for it is that these emissions may cause global warming. I suppose this issue can’t be
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solved
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their solution may take a long time.

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«The most
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thing I have ever learned»

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People
learn
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things during the whole life. These things can be from
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In most cases
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different
abilities. I have
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many
of them as tying shoelaces,
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the most
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one for me is the ability to cook. I learned it from my mother. It was when I
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Moreover
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money by having this ability.

To sum up, eating is
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people
won’t have an ordinary life without the ability to cook.
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IELTS essay There are many problems with pollution and damage to the environment in the world. The most pressing ones deal with the influence of different kinds of cars on the environment, rivers and seas contamination, and greenhouse gas emissions of factories.

Essay
  American English
11 paragraphs
365 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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