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No doubt that almost all countries have problems with environmental pollution. It remains one of the most important problems for the whole world because environmental conditions influence on our lifestyle.

No doubt that almost all countries have problems with environmental pollution. It remains one of the most important problems for the whole world because environmental conditions influence on our lifestyle. 0aokO
No doubt that almost all countries have problems with environmental pollution. It remains one of the most important problems for the whole world because environmental conditions influence on our lifestyle. In my opinion, these problems can be solved! I do believe that everything depends only on the human conscience, that can persuade people to change. For example, we can refuse from using personal transport. It can lead to reducing carbon dioxide emissions. Also we can reduce pouring harmful substances into lakes and oceans by building recycling plants. Moreover, we can sponsor the scientific programs that can help humanity to invent new sources of green energy that will save the Earth. However, a lot of people think that it is impossible to save the nature because of the progress that they can not stop. They say that we can not replace internal combustion engines, use other energy sources because we are used to using them killing nature. In conclude, I realize that people can create everything that they want. So, if they want to save the nature, they will find the way to do it. Part 2 3. ) Article: The most useful skill Have you ever learnt something that changed your life? I think that it is hard to imagine the knowledge that can do it! However, I have already got such experience. The most important thing that I learnt in my life was an ability to repair cars and build them. When I was a child I always liked to play with LEGO. My father, who studied to be mechanic, saw it and started to teach me how the cars work. You would probably think that it was boring for me. However, it wasn’t! I was so excited that I even refused from LEGO and started to spend all days with my father in our garage. Now I work as a car mechanic at Toyota company and help to create new engines. It is so cool to be a part of such big organization and help people to invent new car technologies. I love it! My love to repair and build cars allowed to find my lifestyle. I can’t imagine my life without it!
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problems for the whole world
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environmental conditions influence on our lifestyle.

In my opinion, these problems can
be solved
! I do believe that everything depends
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only
on the human conscience, that can persuade
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people
to
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change
.

For example
, we can refuse from using personal transport. It can lead to reducing carbon dioxide emissions.
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Also
we can
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reduce
pouring harmful substances into lakes and oceans by building recycling plants.

Moreover
, we can sponsor the scientific programs that can
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help
humanity to invent new sources of green energy that will save the Earth.

However
,
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a lot of
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people
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think
that it is impossible to save the nature
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because
of the progress that they can not
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stop
. They say that we can not replace internal combustion engines,
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use
other energy sources
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because
we are
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used
to using them killing nature.

In conclude, I realize that
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people
can create everything that they want.
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, if they want to save the nature, they will find the way to do it.

Part 2

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Article:

The most useful
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Have you ever
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something that
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your life? I
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think
that it is
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to imagine the knowledge that can do it!
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, I have already
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got
such experience.

The most
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important
thing that I
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learnt
in my life was an ability to repair
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cars
and build them.
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When
I was a child I always liked to play with LEGO. My father, who studied to be mechanic,
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saw
it and
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to teach me how the
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work. You would
probably
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think
that it was boring for me.
However
, it wasn’t! I was
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so
excited that I even refused from LEGO and
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started
to spend all days with my father in our garage.

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Now
I work as a
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car
mechanic at Toyota
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company
and
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help
to create new engines. It is
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so
cool to be a part of such
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organization and
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help
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people
to invent new
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car
technologies. I
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love
it!

My
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love
to repair and build
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cars
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allowed
to find my lifestyle. I can’t imagine my life without it!
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IELTS essay No doubt that almost all countries have problems with environmental pollution. It remains one of the most important problems for the whole world because environmental conditions influence on our lifestyle.

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
365 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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