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• What do you think of the effects on society of individuals being too proud of material possessions

• What do you think of the effects on society of individuals being too proud of material possessions yL2eD

The fact that many young people, particularly those with social standing, are following such materialistic tendencies will affect an entire generation, making other young people value property ownership rather than spiritual values or social sentiments. -Individuals who are only concerned with owning luxury items will not pay attention to other people in society who are going through a difficult time. As a result, they will widen the gap between the rich and the poor.

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 value property ownership rather
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 concerned with owning luxury items will not pay attention to other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 in society who are going through a difficult time. As a result
, they will widen the gap between the rich and the poor. 