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There are many means of transportation in my country. In urban areas usually, people have their private cars or public transport whereas people in rural areas travel on bicycles or motorbikes. My favorite means of transportation used to be public transport. In a small amount of fee, I could travel to many places but because of the recent rise of gas price, the public transportations also increased their fee and I was forced to choose a new way of transportation.

There are many means of transportation in my country. In urban areas usually, people have their private cars or public transport whereas people in rural areas travel on bicycles or motorbikes. My favorite means of transportation used to be public transport. In a small amount of fee, I could travel to many places but because of the recent rise of gas price, the public transportations also increased their fee and I was forced to choose a new way of transportation. QVYDL
There are many means of transportation in my country. In urban areas usually, people have their private cars or public transport whereas people in rural areas travel on bicycles or motorbikes. My favorite means of transportation used to be public transport. In a small amount of fee, I could travel to many places but because of the recent rise of gas price, the public transportations also increased their fee and I was forced to choose a new way of transportation.
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IELTS essay There are many means of transportation in my country. In urban areas usually, people have their private cars or public transport whereas people in rural areas travel on bicycles or motorbikes. My favorite means of transportation used to be public transport. In a small amount of fee, I could travel to many places but because of the recent rise of gas price, the public transportations also increased their fee and I was forced to choose a new way of transportation.

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