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Some people believe that giving support to the local community is more favorable than giving it to a charity to what extent do you agree.

Some people believe that giving support to the local community is more favorable than giving it to a charity 8a7wV
In the concurrent era, people are donating their money in several ways. the bone of contention here is that many people are in favour of giving support to the local communities while others contend by advocating that it is more favourable to donate in charitable organisations I agree to some extent in the support of local towns. my viewpoints are further perused in leading fragments. Indubitably, it is a good way to support the underprivileged people by providing money, education and organising health campaigns. Giving support to local communities induces umpteen benefits. primarily, we can donate the money to the people who are in need of it. giving hand to someone provide us sense of belonginess and complacency. subsequently, it ensues to the upliftment of surroundings. what's more people remains directly in touch with the untrodden peoples of the society. Moreover, no chances of corruption is there. Money is properly being used in the safer hands by the people who donates. people in the communities easily socialise with the people from various backgrounds. majority of masses will enjoy quality of life in better way. to cite an epitome, a teacher in the community can volunteer the unprosperous children through which they can get better education. not only this, but the doctor can also organise some health organisations or companies for the betterment of needy people. On the contrary, "every rose has thorns"similarly, donating funds in charities offers some of the benefits. the most preponderant is people can become the part of global village. further, the money is being utilised on various people at a larger platform. to add on, many affluence people donate 10%of their earnings in unprofitable organisations as they have several branched all over the world which certainly widens their reach and enables them to help even people living in extremely remote places. To core out, a chunk of society prefers to donate in local community as we can see how money is being used, however some charities are not trustable so people does not favour in support to the organisations.
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local
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communities
while others contend by advocating that it is more
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donate
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organisations
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my
viewpoints are
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perused in leading fragments.
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the underprivileged
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money
, education and
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health campaigns. Giving
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local
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communities
induces umpteen benefits.
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, we can
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to the
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upliftment
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's more
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people
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directly
in touch with the
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peoples
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properly
being
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people
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majority
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community
can volunteer the
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unprosperous
children through which they can
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health
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companies
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,
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every rose has thorns
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similarly
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the
most preponderant is
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people
can become the part of global village.
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further
, the
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is being
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10%of their earnings in unprofitable
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organisations
as they have several branched all over the world which
certainly
widens their reach and enables them to
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even
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people
living in
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donate
in
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local
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community
as we can
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money
is being
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charities are not trustable
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IELTS essay Some people believe that giving support to the local community is more favorable than giving it to a charity

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