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There are a number of disadvantages of the Internet.

There are a number of disadvantages of the Internet. 96mdW

First, people can get unreliable information from the Internet. Today, there are many advertisements about language courses on Facebook, Youtube… For example, people can get a high score in IELTS in one or two months. Private organizations hire content writers who post it to attract more viewers and increase their profits. Many people who are spending money on low-quality products can lead to financial loss. Second, people may spend too much time on the Internet. The young often spend much time on the Internet such as playing online games, surfing the news about dramas. Consequently, people can lower their productivity, delay their work or have eye-related diseases.

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people
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 a high score in IELTS in one or two months. Private organizations hire content writers who post it to attract more viewers and increase their profits. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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people
 who are spending money on low-quality products can lead to financial loss. Second, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 may spend too much time on the Internet. The young This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
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 spend much time on the Internet such as playing online games, surfing the news about dramas. Consequently
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people
 can lower their productivity, delay their work or have eye-related diseases. 