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Can you say something about Australian Roads?

Can you say something about Australian Roads? bERLg
There is a very clear division between inland and coastal roads. The built-up coastal area from South Australia to Queensland (and the south western corner of Western Australia) is served by modern freeways and good quality sealed roads. The further inland the traveller goes, the worse the roads become. In the far west of Queensland, for example, the roads can be unsealed and around the Gulf it is common for a road to only have a single width of tarmac. This means that if you come across a road train (they can be over 20 metres long) carrying cattle you have to head off the road. This is not a humorous suggestion. Road trains need all the road and expect on-coming traffic to head for the hills. They have trouble deviating and will destroy a car rather than endanger their entire load.
There is a
very
clear
division between inland and coastal
roads
. The built-up coastal area from South Australia to Queensland (and the south western corner of Western Australia)
is served
by modern freeways and
good
quality sealed
roads
. The
further
inland the
traveller
goes, the worse the
roads
become. In the far west of Queensland,
for example
, the
roads
can
be unsealed
and around the Gulf it is common for a
road
to
only
have a single width of tarmac. This means that if you
come
across a
road
train (they can be over 20
metres
long) carrying cattle you
have to
head off the
road
. This is not a humorous suggestion.
Road
trains need all the
road
and
expect
on-coming traffic to head for the hills. They have trouble deviating and will
destroy
a car
rather
than endanger their entire load.
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IELTS essay Can you say something about Australian Roads?

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