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Then the lips open and the air escapes, creating the p sound.

Then the lips open and the air escapes, creating the p sound. YR96d
Starting from the normal breathing position, the lips are flattened to the sides like when smiling, the body of the tongue tends to slightly raise the tip of the tongue to touch the lower teeth. The tongs were brought closer and began to voice the vowel ei. Then the lips gradually close tightly, the air flow from the lungs is completely blocked in some places, and then the air is pushed to the front of the oral cavity. Then the lips open and the air escapes, creating the p sound.
Starting from the normal breathing position, the lips
are flattened
to the sides like when smiling, the body of the tongue tends to
slightly
raise the tip of the tongue to touch the lower teeth. The tongs
were brought
closer and began to voice the vowel
Possible spelling mistake found.
ei
. Then the lips
gradually
close
tightly
, the air flow from the lungs is completely blocked in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
places, and then the air
is pushed
to the front of the oral cavity. Then the lips open and the air escapes, creating the p sound.
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IELTS essay Then the lips open and the air escapes, creating the p sound.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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