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The worst ime of using public restroom

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Standing with legs crossed and hands on the stomach is a signal of toilet’s time. Generally, restrooms are the one of the most significant places where people to use it every day. Simultaneously, the place sometimes could be considered the worst place in life. To begin with, a kilometer long of queue in front of a small door which the top has a woman figure sign, and an enormous number of women fill in the line. There are only four toilets behind that small gate. Therefore, all of women are forced to hold their suffering inside, but pretend to be normal by using phone in hands. When moving closer to the main door, people start to use one hand cover their mouth and nose due to various smells attack smelling sense. The unpleasant odors reveal uncountable users before this time, and the line still has no the end. The dark wet floor is the first thing to see in the toilet, footsteps are painting on the floor like postage stamp ink. Boot is very suitable to use walking inside in order to prevent unpredictable falls. Inside the small room, the white toilet seat is difficult to find clean spot to relieve the long time holding. The strong smell is still playing the main role, it is not healthy to stay in this room for more than one second. At the corner of the room, a tiny bin has no place to leave the new coming of garbage - the mountain of used toilet papers fill up very high. The most scariest moment is flushing time which has a little water pouring down to wash the waste. It takes more than a minute for a hundred percent clean, and the loud sound seems like hearing an old man is coughing. After opening the door after finish the personal business, there are ten of staring from the queue line. It is better to step out from the toilet room as soon as possible, but the next necessary step is washing hands. A large blurred mirror with a long of broken line and unreleased water in four sinks are provided, three of them are used to do makeup and the another one is washing hands. Unfortunately, the only available sink has no water to do the washing hands. Being 360 degrees scrolling eyes and sigh is commonly seen after trying to open a tap for a few times, and turning away from the sink is the only way to giving up.
Standing with legs crossed and
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hands
on the stomach is a signal of toilet’s
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time
.
Generally
, restrooms are the one of the most significant
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places
where
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people
to
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use
it every day.
Simultaneously
, the
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place
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sometimes
could
be considered
the worst
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place
in life.

To
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begin
with, a kilometer long of queue in front of a
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small
door which the top has a woman figure
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sign
, and an enormous number of women fill in the
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line
. There are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
four toilets behind that
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small
gate.
Therefore
,
Consider using "all women" or "all of the women".
all of women
are forced
to hold their suffering inside,
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but
pretend to be normal by using phone in
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hands
. When moving closer to the main door,
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to
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use
one
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hand
cover their mouth and nose due to various smells attack smelling sense. The unpleasant odors reveal uncountable users
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before
this
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time
, and the
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line
still
has
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
no
the
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end
.

The dark wet floor is the
first
thing to
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see
in the toilet, footsteps are painting on the floor like postage stamp ink. Boot is
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very
suitable to
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use
walking inside in order to
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prevent
unpredictable falls. Inside the
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small
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room
, the white toilet seat is difficult to find clean spot to relieve the long
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time
holding. The strong smell is
still
playing the main role, it is not healthy to stay in this
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room
for more than one second. At the corner of the
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room
, a tiny bin has no
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place
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the new coming of garbage
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
the mountain of
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used
toilet papers fill up
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very
high.

The
Use only "scariest" (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
most scariest
moment is flushing
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time
which has a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
water pouring down to wash the waste. It takes more than a minute for a hundred percent clean, and the loud sound seems like hearing an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
is coughing. After opening the door after finish the personal business, there are ten of staring from the queue
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line
. It is better to step out from the toilet
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room
as
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soon
as possible,
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but
the
next
necessary step is washing hands.

A large blurred mirror with a long of broken
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line
and unreleased water in four sinks
are provided
, three of them are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to do makeup and the another one is washing
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hands
. Unfortunately, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
available sink has no water to do the washing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hands
. Being 360 degrees scrolling eyes and sigh is
commonly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
after trying to open a tap for a few
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
, and turning away from the sink is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way to giving up.
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IELTS essay The worst ime of using public restroom

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  American English
5 paragraphs
418 words
5.5
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