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Decisions that people make quickly aren't always wrong.

Decisions that people make quickly aren't always wrong. EpGoL
Do you make decisions fast or slow? I often make decisions fast. Today I'll tell you about why decisions that people make quickly aren’t always wrong. First, it isn’t always wrong when they choose their own taste. because there are no answers when we choose our own taste, so we are never wrong except when we choose other options that we didn’t want by mistake. For example, there is a child named Ruby, she likes pasta the most. Her parents asked what do you want to eat for lunch, Pasta or chicken or hamburger or pizza? Ruby said quickly that she wants to eat pasta. Then it is not wrong. Second,
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IELTS essay Decisions that people make quickly aren't always wrong.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
111 words
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