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The world’s air pollution levels are rising year on year. What are the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend? What should humanity do to counter this problem?

The world’s air pollution levels are rising year on year. What are the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend? What should humanity do to counter this problem? XE5wO
In this day and age, air pollution rising at an alarming rate in world’s cities. This trend certainly causes a great number of difficulties. This essay will look at some of them and propose several solutions that can possibly be taken by both authorities and individuals to solve these problem. It is generally agreed that air pollution is caused by burning of fossil fuels. When fossil fuels are burned, they release nitrogen oxides into the atmosphere, which contribute to the formation of smog and acid rain. Air pollution has now emerged in developing countries as a result of industrial activities and also increase the private transportation. Thus, people have to overuse the natural resources to supply these enormous demand. In addition to, daily human activities also depend on fossil fuels like driving cars, using electricities, … It is of note that three billion people around the world are using the above sources of energy for their daily heating and cooking requirement. Firstly, air pollution may cause the adverse impact on health. Air pollution is considered as the major environmental risk factor in the incidence and progression of some diseases such as asthma, lung cancer, Alzheimer's and Parkinson's diseases, , autism, respiratory diseases and low birth weight. Air pollution threatens the health of people in many parts of the world and new estimates reveal that million people breath air containing high levels of pollutants. Secondly, similar to people, entire ecosystems have to suffer effects from air pollution. Air pollution can contaminate the surface of bodies of water and soil. This can kill crops or reduce their yield even destroy young trees and other plants. To counter this problem, we must stop burning fossil fuel and alternative energy sources should be exploited. The key factor is that alternative energy sources do not cause as much pollution as the burning of fossil fuels, such as oil or coal. Green power sources from wind, solar power, … are eco-friendly and do not contribute to air contamination. As a result, air quality would be ameliorated, environmental problems might be solved while we also guarantee a boundless supply of energy for the future generation. In conclusion, I consider that poor air quality can be tackled by increasing use of renewable energy. Besides, everybody must join hand to reduce air pollution and build up a green environment.
In this day and age,
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air
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pollution
rising at an alarming rate in world’s cities. This trend
certainly
causes a great number of difficulties. This essay will look at
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some
of them and propose several solutions that can
possibly
be taken
by both authorities and individuals to solve
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these problem
.

It is
generally
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agreed
that
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air
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pollution
is caused
by burning of
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fossil
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fuels
. When
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fossil
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fuels
are burned
, they release nitrogen oxides into the atmosphere, which contribute to the formation of smog and acid rain.
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Air
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pollution
has
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now
emerged in
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developing countries
as a result
of industrial activities and
also
increase the private transportation.
Thus
,
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people
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have to
overuse the natural resources to supply these enormous demand.
In addition
to, daily human activities
also
depend on
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fossil
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fuels
like driving cars, using
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electricities
, … It is of note that three billion
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people
around the world are using the above
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sources
of
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energy
for their daily heating and cooking requirement.

Firstly
,
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air
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pollution
may cause the adverse impact on health.
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Air
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pollution
is considered
as the major environmental
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risk
factor in the incidence and progression of
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some
diseases such as asthma, lung cancer, Alzheimer's and Parkinson's diseases,
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,
autism, respiratory diseases and low birth weight.
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Air
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pollution
threatens the health of
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people
in
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many
parts of the world and new estimates reveal that million
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people
breath
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air
containing high levels of pollutants.
Secondly
, similar to
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people
, entire ecosystems
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have to
suffer effects from
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air
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pollution
.
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Air
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pollution
can contaminate the surface of bodies of water and soil. This can kill crops or
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reduce
their yield even
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destroy
young trees and other plants.

To counter this problem, we
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must
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stop
burning
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fossil
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fuel
and alternative
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energy
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sources
should
be exploited
. The key factor is that alternative
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energy
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sources
do not cause as much
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pollution
as the burning of
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fossil
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fuels
, such as oil or coal. Green power
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sources
from wind, solar power, … are eco-friendly and do not contribute to
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air
contamination.
As a result
,
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air
quality would
be ameliorated
, environmental problems might
be solved
while we
also
guarantee a boundless supply of
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energy
for the future generation.

In conclusion
, I consider that poor
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air
quality can
be tackled
by increasing
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use
of renewable
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energy
.
Besides
, everybody
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must
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join
hand to
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reduce
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air
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pollution
and build up a green environment.
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IELTS essay The world’s air pollution levels are rising year on year. What are the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend? What should humanity do to counter this problem?

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  American English
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390 words
6.0
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