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The best job in the world

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The best job ever. I didn't khow yet what job I want to be. Howue, there are many jobs in our world. In the video she said that when she was 14 years old she became the youngest person to ski to the northpole. She hd to skifor about eight howrs day. I took her about is days to the norh pole Then she slept in tents. I don't know yet what job I want to be so I will tolk about amazing job instead. I saw the amazing job on the internet like Chocolate Constant, Tea Taster, The Prfessional Bridesmad and many more. know There were many amazing joband many job that we don't so we should standy more about it.
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IELTS essay The best job in the world

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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