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My worries about starting at a new school

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I spent 13 years of my life as a student studying Vietnamese education, from kindergarten to high school. I believe it’s a lengthy and sufficient period for me to comprehend the majority of things in this style of schooling. Once there is nothing new to me, I would rather seek a new one than just staying in that framework. In this day and age, it is increasingly easy to go abroad for those who are dissatisfied with their current circumstances and want to engage in a new education. I’m no exception, in order to get additional knowledge and experience, I opted to study overseas and Australia is my next destination. Although there are many undeniable positives to this trend such as linguistic environment and employment prospects, there are also some doubted negatives that concern me a lot. First and foremost, the most difficult hurdles, I suppose, are the language barriers and cultural differences. Despite the fact that I’ve been learning English for nearly 3 years and I’m able to communicate in English, I still lack the confidence to speak with native speakers. When I learn and interact with this language more, I discover that there are several aspects such as slang, synonyms and technical terms that require me to know and utilize naturally as a native speaker. Furthermore, these days, migration is growing more prevalent as people seek a better life, new experiences or due to socio-political factors. That’s why English is not a unique language there and I’m afraid of being lost in a group of people who are passionate about talking in their language and forget that I can’t understand it. Similarly, there are cultural differences. Without a doubt, Australia is much more different compared to my home country which is Vietnam. Apparently, because there are not many Vietnamese there and Australia is a multi-cultural country. So, I guess that integrating into that society is also one of the major obstacles that I have to face off. Anyhow, I should establish and maintain an open mind so that I can overcome these barriers. Another worrying difficulty that I have to suffer is homesickness. Honestly, I really love my family and can fathom how bad it is when being geographically apart from them. Every day at home, I have meals with my family, gambol with my siblings whenever we have spare time or hold a family gathering for every festival and holiday. I’ve been used to this sensation for a long time and suddenly everything around me changes and be unfamiliar, I wonder how I will cope. Furthermore, my support network is usually my family but if I live far away from them, my support will be also thousands of miles away from me. Regardless of this difficulty, I believe that if I keep a good attitude and positive mindset, I will be able to adapt and build up a new support network for myself. In brief, studying overseas is not always trouble-free, but it’s an international exposure and an interesting experience unlike any other. It’s also my decision and I have to take responsibility for it. Therefore, I always encourage and motivate myself to be tough and seize this opportunity for my long-term goal.
I spent 13 years of my life as a student studying Vietnamese education, from kindergarten to high school. I believe it’s a lengthy and sufficient period for me to comprehend the majority of things in this style of schooling. Once there is nothing
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new
to me, I would
rather
seek a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
one than
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just
staying in that framework. In this day and age, it is
increasingly
easy to go abroad for those who
are dissatisfied
with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
circumstances and want to engage in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
education. I’m no exception, in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
additional knowledge and experience, I opted to study overseas and Australia is my
next
destination. Although there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
undeniable positives to this trend such as linguistic environment and employment prospects, there are
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
doubted negatives that concern me a lot.

First
and foremost, the most difficult hurdles, I suppose, are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
barriers and cultural differences. Despite the fact that I’ve been learning English for
nearly
3 years and I’m able to communicate in English, I
still
lack the confidence to speak with native speakers. When I learn and interact with this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
more, I discover that there are several aspects such as slang, synonyms and technical terms that require me to know and utilize
naturally
as a native speaker.
Furthermore
, these days, migration is growing more prevalent as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
seek a better life,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
experiences or due to
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socio-political
factors. That’s why English is not a unique
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
there and I’m afraid of
being lost
in a group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who are passionate about talking in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and forget that I can’t understand it.
Similarly
, there are cultural differences. Without a doubt, Australia is much more
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different
compared to my home country which is Vietnam.
Apparently
,
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because
there are not
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many
Vietnamese there and Australia is a multi-cultural country.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I guess that integrating into that society is
also
one of the major obstacles that I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
face off. Anyhow, I should establish and maintain an open mind
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can overcome these barriers.

Another worrying difficulty that I
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have to
suffer is homesickness.
Honestly
, I
really
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love
my
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family
and can fathom how
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
it is when being
geographically
apart from them. Every day at home, I have meals with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
, gambol with my siblings whenever we have spare time or hold a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
gathering for every festival and holiday. I’ve been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to this sensation for a long time and
suddenly
everything around me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
and be unfamiliar, I wonder how I will cope.
Furthermore
, my support network is
usually
my
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family
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
far away from them, my support will be
also
thousands of miles away from me. Regardless of this difficulty, I believe that if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
attitude and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
mindset, I will be able to adapt and build up a
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new
support network for myself.

In brief
, studying overseas is not always trouble-free,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it’s an international exposure and an interesting experience unlike any other. It’s
also
my decision and I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take responsibility for it.
Therefore
, I always encourage and motivate myself to be tough and seize this opportunity for my long-term goal.
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IELTS essay My worries about starting at a new school

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4 paragraphs
536 words
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