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The world of crypto and its criminal side.

The world of crypto and its criminal side. 3MEyw
Crypto became more popular over the years, mainly because of its attention in newspapers. Crypto is suspected to be used by many criminals as a way to hide their illegal money from the government. Some say this is false and not true at all. They say crypto bring us more freedom, freedom we all need in a world with much corruption and control of banks who inflate the money of the people who barely can survive, referring to Turkey, Venezuela and other growing economies. Crypto is seen as the invention of the 21st century, it is here to bring us more freedom. Are you ready to brake the chain?
Crypto became more popular over the years,
mainly
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of its attention in newspapers.

Crypto
is suspected
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used
by
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many
criminals as a way to
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hide
their illegal money from the
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government
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Some
say this is false and not true at all. They say crypto bring us more freedom, freedom we all need in a world with much corruption and control of banks who inflate the money of the
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people
who
barely
can survive, referring to Turkey, Venezuela and other growing economies.

Crypto is
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seen
as the invention of the 21st century, it is here to bring us more freedom.

Are you ready to brake the chain?
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IELTS essay The world of crypto and its criminal side.

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4 paragraphs
109 words
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