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Hardwork is essential to achieve success. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Hardwork is essential to achieve success. N805y
Nobody can deny that hardwork play an indispensable role in every field. In this regard, success is occured with excessive work which is done by people's. while this can prove to be beneficial and in my opinion it is effacious for progress. Taking into account certain factors it is justified to believe that why hardwork is beneficial for number of reasons. Firstly, work around the clock is not only necessary for success but also to obtain name and fame. It also helpful to acquire high opportunities in life in order to accomplish the desires. Mark Zuckerberg, for instance, is co -founder of Facebook. He did lot of hardwork during his young age to achieve status and success. Hence, hardwork is lucrative to gain anything in life.
Nobody can deny that
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hardwork
play an indispensable role in every field. In this regard, success is
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occured
with excessive work which
is done
by
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people
's.
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while
this can prove to be beneficial and in my opinion it is
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effacious
for progress. Taking into account certain factors it
is justified
to believe that why
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hardwork
is beneficial for number of reasons.
Firstly
, work around the clock is not
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only
necessary for success
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but
also
to obtain name and fame.
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It
also
helpful to acquire high opportunities in life in order to accomplish the desires. Mark Zuckerberg,
for instance
, is co -founder of Facebook. He did
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lot of
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hardwork
during his young age to achieve status and success.
Hence
,
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hardwork
is lucrative to gain anything in life.
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IELTS essay Hardwork is essential to achieve success.

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  American English
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126 words
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