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The World is becoming a forest of the building. It is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason for the global warming? Can you suggest ways, to eradicate global warming?

The World is becoming a forest of the building. It is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason for the global warming? Can you suggest ways, to eradicate global warming? BlXAj
Deforestation has increased rapidly in the last few decades which has resulted in our modern concrete jungle. It has become hard to find trees in a place other than rain forests, which is also on the verge of eradication. Deforestation is one of the reasons for global warming. This essay will discuss the different reasons for global warming and ways to eliminate global warming. Global warming has become one of the severe issues for the whole world which is threatening the extinction of humanity. Firstly, it is known that a lack of trees causes less rainfall and increases the temperature. The best example would be desert-like Sahara where there are no trees and no rainfall accompanied by high temperature. Therefore, it would be not farfetched to say that deforestation is one of the reasons for global warming. Secondly, the excessive emission of greenhouse gases from fuel-inefficient vehicles has also attributed to global warming. Living in a place with only buildings and no trees would be difficult. People have fought in saving trees many times. Talking about the suggestion to nullify global warming, people should stop deforestation and start planting trees. For example, in the Chipko movement, which took place in Uttarakhand in 1973, people hugged trees to prevent other people from cutting them. A courageous act indeed! We can also do trivial things to save trees. Deforestation is harmful to us, and in turn for man. A planet with no trees would mean a planet with no life. Forests are the habitat of many plants and animals on which the circle of life depends. People should use vehicles which has power sources other than fossil fuels. To sum up, this essay discussed the different reasons for global warming and a suggestion to eradicate global warmin
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Deforestation
has increased
rapidly
in the last few decades which has resulted in our modern concrete jungle. It has become
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hard
to find
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trees
in a place other than rain forests, which is
also
on the verge of eradication.
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Deforestation
is one of the
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reasons
for
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global
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warming
. This essay will discuss the
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different
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reasons
for
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global
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warming
and ways to eliminate
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global
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warming
.
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Global
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warming
has become one of the severe issues for the whole world which is threatening the extinction of humanity.
Firstly
, it
is known
that a lack of
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trees
causes less rainfall and increases the temperature. The best example would be desert-like Sahara where there are no
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trees
and no rainfall accompanied by high temperature.
Therefore
, it would be not farfetched to say that
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deforestation
is one of the
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reasons
for
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global
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warming
.
Secondly
, the excessive emission of greenhouse gases from fuel-inefficient vehicles has
also
attributed to
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global
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warming
. Living in a place with
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only
buildings and no
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trees
would be difficult.
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People
have fought in saving
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trees
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many
times. Talking about the suggestion to nullify
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global
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warming
,
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people
should
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stop
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deforestation
and
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start
planting
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trees
.
For example
, in the
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Chipko
movement, which took place in Uttarakhand in 1973,
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people
hugged
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trees
to
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prevent
other
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people
from cutting them. A courageous act
indeed
! We can
also
do trivial things to save
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trees
.
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Deforestation
is harmful to us, and in turn for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
. A planet with no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
would mean a planet with no life. Forests are the habitat of
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many
plants and animals on which the circle of life depends.
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People
should
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use
vehicles which has power sources other than fossil fuels. To sum up, this essay discussed the
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different
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reasons
for
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global
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warming
and a suggestion to eradicate
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global
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IELTS essay The World is becoming a forest of the building. It is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason for the global warming? Can you suggest ways, to eradicate global warming?

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  American English
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294 words
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