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Government should more money on teaching science other than subject

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Science plays an important role in the growth and progress of a nation. However, other subjects are also important for the economic development of a country. Therefore, I believe that the government should allot equal funds for the teaching of all subjects. Science subjects are definitely helpful. They help to solve many problems affecting us and our environment. Government funding will lead to improvement in medical research and the invention of many cures. Health, after all, is wealth. In order for a nation to progress, its people have to be healthy. Research in medical science facilitates this. In addition, scientific research in agriculture can increase the fertility of the land and result in economic growth. Science subjects like technology and engineering also play a crucial role in making our lives happy and comfortable. Obviously, the government funding of science subjects helps the country to develop and progress.
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government
should allot equal funds for the teaching of all subjects.

Science
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subjects
are definitely helpful. They
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many
problems affecting us and our environment.
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Government
funding will lead to improvement in medical research and the invention of
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many
cures. Health,
after all
, is wealth. In order for a nation to progress, its
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people
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have to
be healthy. Research in medical
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science
facilitates this.
In addition
, scientific research in agriculture can increase the fertility of the land and result in economic growth.
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Science
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subjects
like technology and engineering
also
play a crucial role in making our
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lives
happy and comfortable.
Obviously
, the
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government
funding of
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science
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helps
the country to develop and progress.
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IELTS essay Government should more money on teaching science other than subject

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  American English
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